No matter how flawed and dumb he is to be a paragon he must've been pretty old right since his current progress is due to literal hax. Not only that but with age comes maturity so add 17 years to that. He's still way too dumb and immature considering the facts. Shouldn't have made him a reincarnated to begin with, the novel isn't horribly had but it lacks a certain umph. Unlike other major novels I feel no weight at all to his breakthroughs and the cultivation realms. Dropping this after all. At most he's merely a character that acts his physical age for once instead of a 12 year old with mental issues like the other cliches reincarnated mcs. The problems just keep piling up after a point. There's no excitement either. I found myself skipping and speed reading chapters as they were too boring or just simply couldn't hook me at all. Kind of interesting premise but it was poorly executed.

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Author, this novel is simply a masterpiece (For me) I'm not lying The grammars are top-notch and the storyline seems to go in an interesting direction I hope the author will continue to write this amazing novel

honestly pretty good so far, the writing and grammer is excellent. I'll keep reading cause it's got an interesting plot. it is going to be interesting how you balance real life/game time because people need to work and eat. if you go offline for a few hours then days will go by

Really tried to put up with it despite the issues, but I just can't. First the Cultivation is ridiculous, the MC just spends one chapter every so often and bam he skipped many levels in a short time to deal with the current issue, even the Dao comprehension part is just skipped as the MC just gets a rare resource that allowed him to comprehend the Dao automatically every now and then. I kid you not there was a fight against an arrogant young master in the starting small province of a sub-continent that took 5 chapters despite the fact that the MC can one shot the dude and the tournament took like another 10. That is a smaller part of the next issue, the author loves going into detail about the most meaningless things but has no issue glossing over things that are important, do you want to read about the MC losing his V-card to his wife on the day they got married, in which they started dating the night before? Do you want to hear the background story of the Aunt who is arguably one of the most important characters and a harem candidate? Well to bad as you will get a fade to black. Even with important things that did get explained we had some fade to black stuff happen multiple times, like we got no less than 2 times where the circumstances of the MCs birth got interrupted by nothing before we are finally told, which feels like the author's failed attempt to create interest. The Cultivation system is crude and not well explained or thought out, like there is a certain power that allows one to fight above their power level, but everyone can use it so everyone can theoretically fight above their level. I guess the most popular comparison I can think of is DBZ where power levels are impossible to properly measure but you can still tell if you're weaker or not. So don't expect cultivation realms to mean jack****. The Earth bits should be thrown out as it is a complete dumpster fire. This story would have been at least a 3.5/5 if the earth stuff never existed tbh as it is somehow the absolute worst thing about this series.

Okay so... I need to read more but so far it is a very rough story. I'm two chapters in and there are already a ridiculous amount issues. Grammer for one, using male pronouns instead of female and confusing the reader is a big one. There are also already some plot issues I see on the horizon. Honestly, I think that the premise is good but it just needs more work and thought. Could also use someone to go through and help with grammar. I will try to continue and may update the review if there is any improvement in quality, character depth, or flow vs forced plot.

well one word . if you are a masochist, wants to be mentally tortured this is for you!!! this is the first time ii m going to do a bad review and did not even last 2-3 chapters . the story has a lot of potential especially in world building but bro!!! you gotta ruin it with the mc stupidity ! might as well make him normal teenager not reincarnator. mc is projecting the character of a loser and you are telling me he is a young paragon it past life? i am not gonna continue reading this but for those who are curious check till the end . the only advantage here is the update stability and potential world background .

Best xianxia novel.(read upto chapter 15)................ . ..................... .. ................... ... .................. ....

Pretty good start but gets quite boring quite fast/makes me lose interest.