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IAmALazyIdiot
IAmALazyIdiotLv14yr
2021-04-20 19:14

Author, this novel is simply a masterpiece (For me) I'm not lying The grammars are top-notch and the storyline seems to go in an interesting direction I hope the author will continue to write this amazing novel

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AaronchifV2
AaronchifV2Lv14

Haven’t read it yet but from the looks of the synopsis i agree

SexyYoungMaster
SexyYoungMasterLv14

I wouldn’t call the grammar top notch, it honestly needs a little work. Otherwise not bad like you said.

BrotherBrainDamage
BrotherBrainDamageLv5

true

SexyYoungMaster:I wouldn’t call the grammar top notch, it honestly needs a little work. Otherwise not bad like you said.
Otacon88
Otacon88Lv15

Honestly if you say ‘the grammars are top notch’ the chances you could tell the difference are slim to none.... there is only one Grammer

RealNasty
RealNastyLv4

who would've thought there is more than one grammar

Jinzou
JinzouLv12

finally, after several months waiting to pile, time to eat them all !

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q00u
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FunnyBuns
FunnyBunsLv15

Really tried to put up with it despite the issues, but I just can't. First the Cultivation is ridiculous, the MC just spends one chapter every so often and bam he skipped many levels in a short time to deal with the current issue, even the Dao comprehension part is just skipped as the MC just gets a rare resource that allowed him to comprehend the Dao automatically every now and then. I kid you not there was a fight against an arrogant young master in the starting small province of a sub-continent that took 5 chapters despite the fact that the MC can one shot the dude and the tournament took like another 10. That is a smaller part of the next issue, the author loves going into detail about the most meaningless things but has no issue glossing over things that are important, do you want to read about the MC losing his V-card to his wife on the day they got married, in which they started dating the night before? Do you want to hear the background story of the Aunt who is arguably one of the most important characters and a harem candidate? Well to bad as you will get a fade to black. Even with important things that did get explained we had some fade to black stuff happen multiple times, like we got no less than 2 times where the circumstances of the MCs birth got interrupted by nothing before we are finally told, which feels like the author's failed attempt to create interest. The Cultivation system is crude and not well explained or thought out, like there is a certain power that allows one to fight above their power level, but everyone can use it so everyone can theoretically fight above their level. I guess the most popular comparison I can think of is DBZ where power levels are impossible to properly measure but you can still tell if you're weaker or not. So don't expect cultivation realms to mean jack****. The Earth bits should be thrown out as it is a complete dumpster fire. This story would have been at least a 3.5/5 if the earth stuff never existed tbh as it is somehow the absolute worst thing about this series.

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