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Evann_Clarke
Evann_ClarkeLv123yr
2021-06-29 14:14

im sorry but f you the story is to fast with hornet with ember if they knew each other better than it would be very good relationship but in my opinion it was rushed thats all

Traveling the multiverse reincarnated as Hollow knight

Duncan_Quan
4.6
26 Chs

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Evann_Clarke
Evann_ClarkeLv12

i have more to say can you plz explain how he gets hes power and dont say the system its charms not power

3yr
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Evann_Clarke
Evann_ClarkeLv12

like the spiders graplings

3yr
Duncan_Quan
Duncan_QuanAuthor

Yay! My first critique! Cool, alright, thank you for point out how fast the relationship is, I have never been in one and the most experience I have is some romance anime, and other fanfics so it’s all screwy, also he got his powers from the void, and the voice that was talking to him there. I hope this answers your questions [img=recommend] Have a Soviet Yun-Yun

3yr
Evann_Clarke
Evann_ClarkeLv12

ok and thank you

3yr
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GolemSpartan
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A solid story that covers what I believe should happen during an Isekai. While some might not like how certain aspects are set up I find that this makes the story unique and almost fresh to read.

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Running_is_advised
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Lord_tachanka
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FBI_Nothis04
FBI_Nothis04Lv5

not much to review only 3 chap, but it shows potential, It's not impossible to read and I didn't find any grammatical errors, it just started meaning the characters had no time to develop at all and since for now thinking further than hollow knight is useless i will use it's story's world backround for the rating, i don't know f you plan to continue this but it would be fun to read, I might change this review if new chapters come out.

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Duncan_Quan
Duncan_QuanAuthor

Hey, writing my own review, with my own thoughts, about my own story. If you like the story then hooray you liked it, if not then alright then its how you feel

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Omori101
Omori101Lv14

it was a very great story, sadly cut short but I'm very thankful towards the author for his although rushed quite good ending. i want you to know that I really liked the concept of the story and that your writing was actually quite good. i think you didn't have to say about your ideas that you don't think you can bring them to life because i think you can and they would have been Great. thank you for the read and i hope you are doing well... on a side note does anyone else know some other good hollow knight novel, I've been searching for a while and this was the only good one I found?

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The_Puffer
The_PufferLv14

Its not traveling multiverses but more like universes Come to you. The wholesome moments are great but the romance feels a little rushed. (She kisses him the moment they met) the ending feels rushed too. At least you finished it instead of droping it.

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Reaper_X_7998
Reaper_X_7998Lv15

overall a feat novel to read it just wish there were more chapters and its updated quicker orher than that its great please dont drop.......

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