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Duncan_Quan
Duncan_QuanAuthor3yr
2021-04-17 11:36

Hey, writing my own review, with my own thoughts, about my own story. If you like the story then hooray you liked it, if not then alright then its how you feel

Traveling the multiverse reincarnated as Hollow knight

Duncan_Quan
4.6
26 Chs

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FBI_Nothis04
FBI_Nothis04Lv5

for now since it just started I can only give it the fact that it has a great pottential, i'll be there if you ever release chap 4.

3yr
RuberDF
RuberDFLv5

So, I must know if O can expect the female knight to look like this xD

3yr
Duncan_Quan
Duncan_QuanAuthor

You mean hornet, and no, but nice pic

RuberDF:So, I must know if O can expect the female knight to look like this xD
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3yr
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RuberDF
RuberDFLv5

Duncan_Quan:You mean hornet, and no, but nice pic
3yr
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

Harem or No harem...?

3yr
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GolemSpartan
GolemSpartanLv12

A solid story that covers what I believe should happen during an Isekai. While some might not like how certain aspects are set up I find that this makes the story unique and almost fresh to read.

3yr

Lord_Heydrich
Lord_HeydrichLv4

5 Stars! Keep up the good work!

3yr
Running_is_advised
Running_is_advisedLv4

Is this heaven a hollow knight fanfic???? Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie

2yr
Lord_tachanka
Lord_tachankaLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
FBI_Nothis04
FBI_Nothis04Lv5

not much to review only 3 chap, but it shows potential, It's not impossible to read and I didn't find any grammatical errors, it just started meaning the characters had no time to develop at all and since for now thinking further than hollow knight is useless i will use it's story's world backround for the rating, i don't know f you plan to continue this but it would be fun to read, I might change this review if new chapters come out.

3yr
Omori101
Omori101Lv14

it was a very great story, sadly cut short but I'm very thankful towards the author for his although rushed quite good ending. i want you to know that I really liked the concept of the story and that your writing was actually quite good. i think you didn't have to say about your ideas that you don't think you can bring them to life because i think you can and they would have been Great. thank you for the read and i hope you are doing well... on a side note does anyone else know some other good hollow knight novel, I've been searching for a while and this was the only good one I found?

1yr
The_Puffer
The_PufferLv14

Its not traveling multiverses but more like universes Come to you. The wholesome moments are great but the romance feels a little rushed. (She kisses him the moment they met) the ending feels rushed too. At least you finished it instead of droping it.

2yr
Thenoicemaster
ThenoicemasterLv3

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Reaper_X_7998
Reaper_X_7998Lv15

overall a feat novel to read it just wish there were more chapters and its updated quicker orher than that its great please dont drop.......

3yr
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