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2021-04-21 01:12

not much to review only 3 chap, but it shows potential, It's not impossible to read and I didn't find any grammatical errors, it just started meaning the characters had no time to develop at all and since for now thinking further than hollow knight is useless i will use it's story's world backround for the rating, i don't know f you plan to continue this but it would be fun to read, I might change this review if new chapters come out.

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