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Omnidoa
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2021-04-13 07:29

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Darknorth_JiNing
Darknorth_JiNingLv1

In my opinion, the translator has changed names and terms from eastern to western. Even the events happening are similar. I dont know if this the case but i found a novel on faloo that highly highly resembles this Journey to the West: My disciples are too arrogant. θ₯ΏζΈΈοΌšζˆ‘ηš„εΌŸε­δ»¬θΏ‡δΊŽεš£εΌ  Once again this is my opinion. Apologies if this is not the case

Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv5

oh πŸ€”πŸ˜‚, guess that makes alot of sense πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Darknorth_JiNing:In my opinion, the translator has changed names and terms from eastern to western. Even the events happening are similar. I dont know if this the case but i found a novel on faloo that highly highly resembles this Journey to the West: My disciples are too arrogant. θ₯ΏζΈΈοΌšζˆ‘ηš„εΌŸε­δ»¬θΏ‡δΊŽεš£εΌ  Once again this is my opinion. Apologies if this is not the case
Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv5

thanks for posting 😁😊

Darknorth_JiNing:In my opinion, the translator has changed names and terms from eastern to western. Even the events happening are similar. I dont know if this the case but i found a novel on faloo that highly highly resembles this Journey to the West: My disciples are too arrogant. θ₯ΏζΈΈοΌšζˆ‘ηš„εΌŸε­δ»¬θΏ‡δΊŽεš£εΌ  Once again this is my opinion. Apologies if this is not the case
HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

...Is this novel really it? Why is it different? It has Buddhism and the journey of the west which is different from the mythology mentioned?? I'm confused as fudge

Darknorth_JiNing:In my opinion, the translator has changed names and terms from eastern to western. Even the events happening are similar. I dont know if this the case but i found a novel on faloo that highly highly resembles this Journey to the West: My disciples are too arrogant. θ₯ΏζΈΈοΌšζˆ‘ηš„εΌŸε­δ»¬θΏ‡δΊŽεš£εΌ  Once again this is my opinion. Apologies if this is not the case
Darknorth_JiNing
Darknorth_JiNingLv1

As I said I am not sure but there are multiple similarities: Journey for the western buddhist scriptures = Holy flame transmission Buddhaland/ Western heavens/ Lingshan = God Realm Heavens = Nether Realm Guanyin bodhisatva = Heimdall Monk Tang Sanzong = Merlin The eldest disciple Woman queen ( dont remember her name) = Elf queen Angel The moon jade rabbit = fox of some nine tailed fox Change = The nine tailed fox Gold winged peng = Gold winged roc Six eared macaque = shadow wolf Heaven equal great sage sun wukong monkey king = Forest wolf wolf king Zixia fiary = Athena goddess The crown prince of changan = the crown prince of saint peterburg Snarling heaven dog = Thanatos Little girl witch mentioned in ch 40 Satan = Haotian Hades = Yang Jian Zeus = Tathagata Buddha These characters had a lot of similar actions. Sorry for any spelling mistake.

HolyDragon17:...Is this novel really it? Why is it different? It has Buddhism and the journey of the west which is different from the mythology mentioned?? I'm confused as fudge
HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

I read the first chapter word for word and there's not much difference. I read a comment saying WN rewrites the stories.. I didn't believe it to be true till now. But it also doesn't make any sense! The raw version is clearly much better. Ugh I'm hesitating to whether read this or not. (Still confused)

Darknorth_JiNing:As I said I am not sure but there are multiple similarities: Journey for the western buddhist scriptures = Holy flame transmission Buddhaland/ Western heavens/ Lingshan = God Realm Heavens = Nether Realm Guanyin bodhisatva = Heimdall Monk Tang Sanzong = Merlin The eldest disciple Woman queen ( dont remember her name) = Elf queen Angel The moon jade rabbit = fox of some nine tailed fox Change = The nine tailed fox Gold winged peng = Gold winged roc Six eared macaque = shadow wolf Heaven equal great sage sun wukong monkey king = Forest wolf wolf king Zixia fiary = Athena goddess The crown prince of changan = the crown prince of saint peterburg Snarling heaven dog = Thanatos Little girl witch mentioned in ch 40 Satan = Haotian Hades = Yang Jian Zeus = Tathagata Buddha These characters had a lot of similar actions. Sorry for any spelling mistake.
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FubarOne
FubarOneLv15

Writing this review after making it through 6 chapters because... it's just bewildering. It's all over the place. Seriously, like... what? So far it's been a haphazard pile of ideas thrown together into a pile with no apparent attempt to maintain any sort of coherence. Just slapping together every possible myth and cramming them into the first few chapters doesn't a good story make. The first chapter by itself was all over the place. No idea about whether the MC is actually powerful, though presumably he is? There's no attempt to make any sort of understandable timeline, with a description of him arriving in some uninhabited part of the world only a few years before, and then wandering a bit before becoming the master of a city. But that he also spent two years turning the place around and having to build a magic academy. But ALSO that the second day after he arrived in the world he somehow created a system and built a magic academy. And even though all this happened in the last "few" years, the students in the academy rarely saw the MC in ten or twenty years. Also it's mentioned he has a couple pets, but that's like a single line, thrown in for who knows what reason. Oh and he can't be bothered to teach anymore since he didn't really want students in the first place, but they just started showing up. So he filled the empty library with knockoff bad fiction novels that he'd just thrown together and told the students to just go read those. That's the first chapter. Then it starts to get weird. Why bother including well known gods if you're gonna make a mess of them. The disjointed hodgepodge of myths thrown in (Zeus is Odin, but not really, he just did what Odin did, but then the name Odin is slipped in for some reason, Thor is the son of Zeus and/or Odin and/or whatever, and Loki is the god of fire, and Satan is here too just to join the party) is just so jarring that it took me completely out of the story trying to figure out what was even going on. But that seems to be a theme here, having to stop reading to go back a couple paragraphs just to try to figure out what is even happening or who is who or who is what or who is even a thing.

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