A very early review and my first so apologies if the review is not helpful. The story has alot of potential i have not seen a concept making players gods who interact and fight each other yet making it original and scratching a ich i never knew i had. The writing quality is good and normally we get a chapter a day or the equivalent of though the background seems similar to The Kings Avatar its nice to have a fresh take of a former kiked out pro going into a new game. The main character appears to be smart and powerful and is the first level 3 player in within his subrace making him very powerful amongst his peers this is fine however novels with just a overpowered main character beating everyone from my experience gets boring quickly. introducing rivels who can fight with him on similar levels would be nice like in The Kings Avatar. Warning beneath has major spoilers for The Kings Avatar which is used as a example to make a point. No matter how good Ye Xiu is in The Kings Avatar he cannot easily face guilds alone and his team does have their own setbacks with losses and with pro players the very top of the game can still fight him on similar levels and every victory is hard fought and we even see his slight decline due to age as his physical body cannot keep up with the hand speed of his youth as at the end his hands carnt even hold up the trophy due to the exhaustion from playing flat out. The novel is excellent and please continue writing as i cannot get enough of this novel just a slight warning that powerful characters are fine and a ex pro playing a game should have a edge but he needs a rival who can make him take some sort of loss this could come from other races gods in the novel or even other subraces gods making him lose followers or a few stats. It is just a friendly reminder that overpowered characters who always win lower the tension in a novel just look at the books for Game of Thrones people are always afraid of the next people to die. Also i dont want another novel especially one as good as this in its early stages to suffer from decline due to this. Of course the game in the novel is currently in Beta and i dont know if a reset will happen once the beta test is finished or if they will just keep the game rolling and i am excited to read more. please continue writing this great novel it has great potential.
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LIKEthank you for replying good to know the MC wont be OP also love the way you make the damage in the game easy to understand really helps us readers put things into perspective as what is powerful at the time and what is not and thank you for your excellent work on the novel so far looking forward for the next update
The npc's aren't really npc's after reading the story. They are as real as any other character in the story, which is why theres a chance he'll fall in love with an npc. Plus, something that seems really exciting is the possibility of them having children cause that means demigod babies!! Wooo!
jacklandet:the dude has feelings for an npc??
Tbh I’m hoping for that outcome. I hope he gets together with his ania. Tbh the npc are basically people but just stuck in a game tbh. So it would be a surprises if he did. Plus it was hinted towards that
Purelestial:The npc's aren't really npc's after reading the story. They are as real as any other character in the story, which is why theres a chance he'll fall in love with an npc. Plus, something that seems really exciting is the possibility of them having children cause that means demigod babies!! Wooo!