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Fenrirzero9999
Fenrirzero9999Lv131yr
2023-04-23 19:22

mc should have this power due to his parentage and more: Superhuman Physical Characteristics, Flight, Telepathy, Illusion Creation, Mind Manipulation Memory Manipulation Empathic Manipulation Sleep Manipulation Soul Manipulation techno kinesis and technopathy Infrared Vision X-Ray Vision Electromagnetic Spectrum Vision Telescopic Vision Microscopic Vision Extrasensory Perception Energy Projection, Shapeshifting, Size shifting Telekinesis, Matter Manipulation Gravity Manipulation Invisibility Heat Vision Sonic Scream, Super Breath, Durability Negation with Intangibility Immortality (Types 1 and 3), Regeneration, Vibration Manipulation Flight Possession Astral Projection Pyrokinesis Bio-Fission

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_Bruh
_BruhLv12

Make your own fanfic bozo

Enderman_
Enderman_Lv2

Chillll

sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv3

what powers does he have then and who are his parents then

Fenrirzero9999
Fenrirzero9999Lv13

martian man hunter, black canary

sari_saarinen:what powers does he have then and who are his parents then
Morg535
Morg535Lv14

Why write all that just slap GOD down and save yourself some time

HentaiGodZ
HentaiGodZLv4

Fenrirzero9999:martian man hunter, black canary
_Bruh
_BruhLv12

Just checked your profile history It's about what I expected for someone calling himself HitlerChan lol

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Shiroya_Akatsuki_2457
Shiroya_Akatsuki_2457Lv4

Genetic clone using their DNA

HentaiGodZ:
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Xrhbd
XrhbdLv13

Flight is there twice

Dark_Rider01
Dark_Rider01Lv13

Yes, wonder why people didn't noticed it...

Xrhbd:Flight is there twice
Drogo_Nyoga
Drogo_NyogaLv2

Why would they make a clone with canary and Martian Manhunter? Weird combo, Martian Manhunter has tons of unique powers, Canary only has like one

Fenrirzero9999
Fenrirzero9999Lv13

It is because human haven plot armour and the Meta human gene can evolve, also it seem that the human gene can be compatible with every gene.

Drogo_Nyoga:Why would they make a clone with canary and Martian Manhunter? Weird combo, Martian Manhunter has tons of unique powers, Canary only has like one
Linus279
Linus279Lv4

I mean if that power is on the level of Black bolt that it's Op

Drogo_Nyoga:Why would they make a clone with canary and Martian Manhunter? Weird combo, Martian Manhunter has tons of unique powers, Canary only has like one
Mr_no
Mr_noLv14

He is pointing out a plot hole. unless there is a point in the story where it explains why he is missing this wide array of powers that he should have due to his DNA your insult stands on no basis. and I can't fathom I have such a brainless comment got so many likes.

_Bruh:Make your own fanfic bozo
_Bruh
_BruhLv12

What plot hole? Have a meta-human and a Martian ever had a child in canon? There is no hole so his whole comment is meaningless like yours.

Mr_no:He is pointing out a plot hole. unless there is a point in the story where it explains why he is missing this wide array of powers that he should have due to his DNA your insult stands on no basis. and I can't fathom I have such a brainless comment got so many likes.
Mr_no
Mr_noLv14

I understand not having the powers of Black Canary but we've seen half aliens half humans before it's understandable not getting all of the powers of Marshins at least get a decent number of them

_Bruh:What plot hole? Have a meta-human and a Martian ever had a child in canon? There is no hole so his whole comment is meaningless like yours.
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_Bruh
_BruhLv12

Says who? Superboy has mixed DNA and he doesn't have all of Superman's powers. Either make your own fanfic or stop telling the author the powers his own character should have.

Mr_no:I understand not having the powers of Black Canary but we've seen half aliens half humans before it's understandable not getting all of the powers of Marshins at least get a decent number of them
Mr_no
Mr_noLv14

it's obvious you're illiterate I said majority as in he should have gotten some of them and they have several cryptonian hybrid clowns and probably hundreds of failed ones so you just chose one of the random experiments and said boom fact and when did I say the author had to give him these powers I was just saying I'm trying to use two very strong people's DNA to create a clone and you decide not to give the Clone at least some of the parents' powers why even use the parents DNA in the first place

_Bruh:Says who? Superboy has mixed DNA and he doesn't have all of Superman's powers. Either make your own fanfic or stop telling the author the powers his own character should have.
_Bruh
_BruhLv12

Lol. The childish insults go well with your dumb comment. If it was that easy, both Dante and Superboy would have had all the powers of their progenitors and they would have made more clones of more heroes. Hybrids in nature are known to be genetically less successful so what is the basis of your claims? Plus they only had two Kryptonians being Project Match and Superboy. You seem to have lots of misconceptions. Maybe watch the show and use common sense before writing silly comments.

Mr_no:it's obvious you're illiterate I said majority as in he should have gotten some of them and they have several cryptonian hybrid clowns and probably hundreds of failed ones so you just chose one of the random experiments and said boom fact and when did I say the author had to give him these powers I was just saying I'm trying to use two very strong people's DNA to create a clone and you decide not to give the Clone at least some of the parents' powers why even use the parents DNA in the first place
Mr_no
Mr_noLv14

it's like you didn't even read my comment you neither disproved any of my statements nor make any attempt to even sound like you read my comments what I got out of those three long paragraphs you just posted was a very exaggerated nu uh and because of that I will no longer be replying to anything you post so don't even try to respond

_Bruh:Lol. The childish insults go well with your dumb comment. If it was that easy, both Dante and Superboy would have had all the powers of their progenitors and they would have made more clones of more heroes. Hybrids in nature are known to be genetically less successful so what is the basis of your claims? Plus they only had two Kryptonians being Project Match and Superboy. You seem to have lots of misconceptions. Maybe watch the show and use common sense before writing silly comments.
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Truth_Only_Reader
Truth_Only_ReaderLv5

Writing Quality: So it has good grammar, I don't see any writing mistakes so far, if they are they are not that noticeable. The main premise of this story is that the MC is a clone of both Black Canary and Martian Manhunter labeled as project MARS. The MC has the abilities of Martian Manhunter while having the looks of a male version of Black Canary. In which he is recruited into the young justice team the same time as Superboy. I so far really love his character, he is mature and realistic in handling situations. There is a lot of good character development happening between the MC and Black Canary as they get closer with their mother and son relationship which is wholesome. It seems like the love interest is leaning towards Zantanna and let be honest, who wouldn't want Zantanna as a girlfriend. But its early so far, so I can't make a conclusion on who the love interest is as when writing this review is a bit too early to conclude. I really like how the author portray the story so far, its almost like the character is canon when reading this novel, or almost like the actual show. Really enjoying it so far. Also the MC is smart, not Genius smart, but smart. Story Development: Pacing is fine so far, there are fight scenes and wholesome scenes. It isn't fast or slow, it is just right when it comes to the pacing so far at least. Story Development is really enjoyable once you read you can't look back. Character Designs: World of Young Justice characters basically. The MC just looks like the book cover or a male version of black Canary but younger. Updating Stability: It updates frequently, not everyday but frequently. As most of these author fanfics sometimes updates are random. World Background: It's young justice what more do you need to know? Conclusion: So far good fanfiction, there are a lot of things I would recommend for the novel, such as making more relationships with the Senior Justice League members, as I want to see more interactions with other people. Other than that, its a good fanfiction, and I hope you enjoy the read. If you have problems with my review just let me know so I can do better in the future, thank you.

CharlieRider
CharlieRiderLv4
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