First off, writing quality is great. You'd barley catch any problems in that department. The first problem I had was with the character. He seems emotionless and bland. He doesn't possess any noteworthy characteristics and seems like a robot with no apparent goal in his life. And author is portraying almost everyone in a bad light. From superman because of his negligence towards superboy to Green Arrow because he found the MC's relationship with Dinah a bit weird and potentially ruining their relationship. He tried to speed things up between superboy and superman by asking Dinah for help, to calm the anger in superboy and increase his efficiency in missions and apparently their relationship did improve but superboy didn't. I also found the animosity between him and Red Arrow unnecessary since he has knowledge of the events of this universe he should also be aware that the current Roy is just a puppet.( It looks a bit forced.) In one of the chapters MC talks about the importance of team work, synergy and bonding between them but he barely even spend time with them. He just comes and goes for the missions.
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LIKEOverall it's enjoyable but it could be better.
