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Truth_Only_Reader
Truth_Only_ReaderLv51yr
2023-04-30 11:18

Writing Quality: So it has good grammar, I don't see any writing mistakes so far, if they are they are not that noticeable. The main premise of this story is that the MC is a clone of both Black Canary and Martian Manhunter labeled as project MARS. The MC has the abilities of Martian Manhunter while having the looks of a male version of Black Canary. In which he is recruited into the young justice team the same time as Superboy. I so far really love his character, he is mature and realistic in handling situations. There is a lot of good character development happening between the MC and Black Canary as they get closer with their mother and son relationship which is wholesome. It seems like the love interest is leaning towards Zantanna and let be honest, who wouldn't want Zantanna as a girlfriend. But its early so far, so I can't make a conclusion on who the love interest is as when writing this review is a bit too early to conclude. I really like how the author portray the story so far, its almost like the character is canon when reading this novel, or almost like the actual show. Really enjoying it so far. Also the MC is smart, not Genius smart, but smart. Story Development: Pacing is fine so far, there are fight scenes and wholesome scenes. It isn't fast or slow, it is just right when it comes to the pacing so far at least. Story Development is really enjoyable once you read you can't look back. Character Designs: World of Young Justice characters basically. The MC just looks like the book cover or a male version of black Canary but younger. Updating Stability: It updates frequently, not everyday but frequently. As most of these author fanfics sometimes updates are random. World Background: It's young justice what more do you need to know? Conclusion: So far good fanfiction, there are a lot of things I would recommend for the novel, such as making more relationships with the Senior Justice League members, as I want to see more interactions with other people. Other than that, its a good fanfiction, and I hope you enjoy the read. If you have problems with my review just let me know so I can do better in the future, thank you.

Young Justice: Ghost

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4.8
49 Chs

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Count_Daath
Count_DaathLv14

Nothing really exciting, the writing quality is great, but that's all you can really give this story. This is not to say I didn't see something in this story, but I'll be honest Superman's negligence of Superboy was some of the best ways superman ever showed his humanity. Sure it sucked for Superboy, but eventually they grew together and became like brothers of close uncle and nephew relationship. This story decides to portray Superman as a deadbeat dad, and I find that to be dumb. Realize something people if Kara was in the universe she'd hate Superboy, at least Superman is taking it as best he can with what could only be the birth of a human rights violation. So to the author I have to drop this story, because who in their right minds chooses Black Canary over Superman?

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TopTierReposter
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a good fanfic that does make your brain wanna kill itself

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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

Truly, one of the best fanfic i have read in recent time. At first when i saw it was Young justic ff i though it'd be average and another timepass book, im so glad i was wrong. This has one of the best writting, and real heart touching moment as well as exciting action. I really think author should look into writing an original novel, with his skills he'd be an instant hit.

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crinix
crinixLv13

First of all grammar and writing is quite good. But writing and story progression left much to desire. We are not properly given character background of MC so he doesn't have any real depth to it...it feels like Author is making things up as story goes on, while it is not a bad thing but it feel frustrating like we don't even know the age of MC, it is stated that the MC died in sleep and he felt pain in chest so it is like he is over 20 as children between 12 to 17 doesn't get heart attack if they don't have serious heart problem...so it would make sense he is over 20 but he is flirting with Zatana. The one main plot hole that Author didn't address was memories of his past life, when Cadmus were teaching him telepathy.. didn't they would have seen his memories!???? it's like Author just gave up and didn't even write some explanation for it

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Fenrirzero9999
Fenrirzero9999Lv13

mc should have this power due to his parentage and more: Superhuman Physical Characteristics, Flight, Telepathy, Illusion Creation, Mind Manipulation Memory Manipulation Empathic Manipulation Sleep Manipulation Soul Manipulation techno kinesis and technopathy Infrared Vision X-Ray Vision Electromagnetic Spectrum Vision Telescopic Vision Microscopic Vision Extrasensory Perception Energy Projection, Shapeshifting, Size shifting Telekinesis, Matter Manipulation Gravity Manipulation Invisibility Heat Vision Sonic Scream, Super Breath, Durability Negation with Intangibility Immortality (Types 1 and 3), Regeneration, Vibration Manipulation Flight Possession Astral Projection Pyrokinesis Bio-Fission

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Truck_kun2007
Truck_kun2007Lv4

Easily one of the best Young Justice fanfictions out there, with clear effort put in with story development. Highly recommended read and please keep updating chapters :)))

1yr
Pooyan_Hoshyar
Pooyan_HoshyarLv4

First off, writing quality is great. You'd barley catch any problems in that department. The first problem I had was with the character. He seems emotionless and bland. He doesn't possess any noteworthy characteristics and seems like a robot with no apparent goal in his life. And author is portraying almost everyone in a bad light. From superman because of his negligence towards superboy to Green Arrow because he found the MC's relationship with Dinah a bit weird and potentially ruining their relationship. He tried to speed things up between superboy and superman by asking Dinah for help, to calm the anger in superboy and increase his efficiency in missions and apparently their relationship did improve but superboy didn't. I also found the animosity between him and Red Arrow unnecessary since he has knowledge of the events of this universe he should also be aware that the current Roy is just a puppet.( It looks a bit forced.) In one of the chapters MC talks about the importance of team work, synergy and bonding between them but he barely even spend time with them. He just comes and goes for the missions.

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DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv11

The story isn't bad nor is it good. The writing quality is great I just got bored around chapter 35-40 ish. Hope everyone else has fun with it.

1yr
CharlieRider
CharlieRiderLv4

Reveal spoiler

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