Nothing really exciting, the writing quality is great, but that's all you can really give this story. This is not to say I didn't see something in this story, but I'll be honest Superman's negligence of Superboy was some of the best ways superman ever showed his humanity. Sure it sucked for Superboy, but eventually they grew together and became like brothers of close uncle and nephew relationship. This story decides to portray Superman as a deadbeat dad, and I find that to be dumb. Realize something people if Kara was in the universe she'd hate Superboy, at least Superman is taking it as best he can with what could only be the birth of a human rights violation. So to the author I have to drop this story, because who in their right minds chooses Black Canary over Superman?

a good fanfic that does make your brain wanna kill itself

Truly, one of the best fanfic i have read in recent time. At first when i saw it was Young justic ff i though it'd be average and another timepass book, im so glad i was wrong. This has one of the best writting, and real heart touching moment as well as exciting action. I really think author should look into writing an original novel, with his skills he'd be an instant hit.

First of all grammar and writing is quite good. But writing and story progression left much to desire. We are not properly given character background of MC so he doesn't have any real depth to it...it feels like Author is making things up as story goes on, while it is not a bad thing but it feel frustrating like we don't even know the age of MC, it is stated that the MC died in sleep and he felt pain in chest so it is like he is over 20 as children between 12 to 17 doesn't get heart attack if they don't have serious heart problem...so it would make sense he is over 20 but he is flirting with Zatana. The one main plot hole that Author didn't address was memories of his past life, when Cadmus were teaching him telepathy.. didn't they would have seen his memories!???? it's like Author just gave up and didn't even write some explanation for it

mc should have this power due to his parentage and more: Superhuman Physical Characteristics, Flight, Telepathy, Illusion Creation, Mind Manipulation Memory Manipulation Empathic Manipulation Sleep Manipulation Soul Manipulation techno kinesis and technopathy Infrared Vision X-Ray Vision Electromagnetic Spectrum Vision Telescopic Vision Microscopic Vision Extrasensory Perception Energy Projection, Shapeshifting, Size shifting Telekinesis, Matter Manipulation Gravity Manipulation Invisibility Heat Vision Sonic Scream, Super Breath, Durability Negation with Intangibility Immortality (Types 1 and 3), Regeneration, Vibration Manipulation Flight Possession Astral Projection Pyrokinesis Bio-Fission

Easily one of the best Young Justice fanfictions out there, with clear effort put in with story development. Highly recommended read and please keep updating chapters :)))

First off, writing quality is great. You'd barley catch any problems in that department. The first problem I had was with the character. He seems emotionless and bland. He doesn't possess any noteworthy characteristics and seems like a robot with no apparent goal in his life. And author is portraying almost everyone in a bad light. From superman because of his negligence towards superboy to Green Arrow because he found the MC's relationship with Dinah a bit weird and potentially ruining their relationship. He tried to speed things up between superboy and superman by asking Dinah for help, to calm the anger in superboy and increase his efficiency in missions and apparently their relationship did improve but superboy didn't. I also found the animosity between him and Red Arrow unnecessary since he has knowledge of the events of this universe he should also be aware that the current Roy is just a puppet.( It looks a bit forced.) In one of the chapters MC talks about the importance of team work, synergy and bonding between them but he barely even spend time with them. He just comes and goes for the missions.

The story isn't bad nor is it good. The writing quality is great I just got bored around chapter 35-40 ish. Hope everyone else has fun with it.

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