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ArkAnghel
ArkAnghelAuthor4yr
2021-04-07 01:08

I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!

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FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

Hey Author, quick question. Is there romance/harem?

ArkAnghel
ArkAnghelAuthor

There is romance but harem not yet

FallenAngeI:Hey Author, quick question. Is there romance/harem?
Npc_a
Npc_aLv4

Why he didn't choose subclass? I mean he has many times to do it. Or I missed it.

ArkAnghel
ArkAnghelAuthor

Well lets say that is for volume 2

Npc_a:Why he didn't choose subclass? I mean he has many times to do it. Or I missed it.
IGotStones
IGotStonesLv4

addicted somebody stop me

ArkAnghel
ArkAnghelAuthor

Niceeee hahaha

IGotStones:addicted somebody stop me
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Daroi
DaroiLv4

Hey author you could use something like “Grammarly” app to impove your writing , even a free version will do miracles. (Ps: it would help if later on you re-edit most if not all of your chapters to improve reader experience )

ArkAnghel
ArkAnghelAuthor

Yes all of he volume 1 chapters are grammarly used well that's why I changed to PWA but I used PWA in the recent chapters.

Daroi:Hey author you could use something like “Grammarly” app to impove your writing , even a free version will do miracles. (Ps: it would help if later on you re-edit most if not all of your chapters to improve reader experience )
LowerUrHaremFlag
LowerUrHaremFlagLv1

YOUR NOVEL LOOKS GOOD. READ MY NAME! AND DONT RUİN YOUR NOVEL

ArkAnghel:There is romance but harem not yet
Cheese_curdles
Cheese_curdlesLv4

not yet? is it definite author?

ArkAnghel:There is romance but harem not yet
Trim_2cool
Trim_2coolLv13

Will there be harem?

ArkAnghel:There is romance but harem not yet
ArkAnghel
ArkAnghelAuthor

No

Trim_2cool:Will there be harem?
Vaylen
VaylenLv13

Respect for this Author right there^^^

ArkAnghel:No
ikka
ikkaLv13

the plz learn to add the romance as a tag! ty

ArkAnghel:There is romance but harem not yet
shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1

ArkAnghel:No
Darin4
Darin4Lv14

is this dropped?

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