I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!

An amazing book, not gonna lie, I only picked it up to get the 200 points for a recommend book, but I'm glad I did. It gives an accurate and detailed description of the world, the characters, and the abilities. There are some spelling mistakes, but they are fat fingers or he went to fast an repeated something. But the Author fixes them very quickly once pointed out. The MC might be overpowered, but there isn't any plot armor and he is very smart. So it doesn't seem that way. Over all a very, very good book and I'm waiting for my next fast pass to read some more!

It is a pretty well written story. Thought out and planned well. The spelling and sentences are improving as chapters go on. Currently on chapter 56 so got a while to give my full thoughts yet only getting a few passes a day.

It was a good read. As what the author had said on his review, his sentence structure needs improvement. But welp, I also need it for mine so overall, this story good. It has interesting and unique plots, and even tho the pace was a little slow at start, it did not disrupt my immersion while reading it.

Content wise, I say three things; I LOVE IT! The plot is very interesting and has really caught my attention. I'm very curious as to how everything came as it is and I can't wait to know as the author drop more chapters in the future. I also like Jin, I love his calm demeanor and level-headedness, or at least that what I noticed about him so far. And no, it's not a spoiler. Grammar and structure wise, it does need a little touch up, but just a little. Seriously, it's something one can just ignore if they love the story, well that's what I did. But over all, the story is fantastic and I can't wait to read more of it! Keep it up Author-san!

Ok let’s begin, the writing is good but not overly good. However, the story quality is dope and that’s what makes me keep reading it. You should give this novel a try if you had never done so otherwise, you will regret it.

To be honest, the start of the novel was not so good...the vocabulary needs improvement too, dialogues didn't looked good...in the first two chapters, it still hasn't explained what is going on. Who is the mc? what is Mythical Realms 😂? I might die out of suspense. On top of that, character introduction n design was not so good. Respected Author, you need to work on that too. some scenes are not explained well...in short, the work is done in an effortless manner. It needs re-editing so that it can show some great work which our author shown in previous novel lol. I hope author is not joking with us by presenting such novel with his current skills lol. I'm expecting great results in future. Hope you edit it soon 👍

I have been into video games for a while and to be honest, I am absolutely amazed by seeing what the book has to offer. It may have a few weak points here and there but I think it would do amazing with better editing. best of luck author san

The abstract is amazing, not too much revealing about the plot, after reading all the 15 chapters, i can feel like this novel as the potential. words are common not too difficult to read, which is the best thing because other reader who are not fluent in english can also enjoy the novel. keep it up author and make sure to upload 1 or 2 chapters daily.