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You can use grammarly

Bro if you ruin your novel with harem. I will change my religion every week and curse you in every religion

This novel is good. Ahahahah author always thinks story is too slow. But its perfect, thats the difference between bad webnovels and ur novel, its going good. But i there is something i dont like : WHY HE DONT GO psychiatrist ABOUT HİS NİGHTMARES, AND HE İS CHOOSİNG TO KİLL ALL NAKS ! But thats okey mate ur going great, but dont make mc stronger than all of noble families’s children

HAHAAA, THATS WHAT İ WANT TO SEE

Wait is this academy is only academy in the world ? Bro if its like that you destroyed your novel

author, can i ask you why you always tell us mc is selfish. ok we got this so stop

Wow He didnt even think about there is magic in real world

YOUR NOVEL LOOKS GOOD. READ MY NAME! AND DONT RUİN YOUR NOVEL

Aah, thats it, when he does a achievement goddess gives him something to make it easy( sorry for bad england)

Yes! Everything in the universe SHOULD BE NAMED JACK!