ArkAnghel
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ArkAnghel1yrReplied to CJSB_2005The entire Empire is currently in dissaray a small revolution is brewing near and commanders that are loyal to the previous emperor.
The voice and tone of the Aide-de-camp changed when he talked to the 2nd Division Commander. The 2nd Division commander has only 2 reply options, agreeing to the orders that will give him recognition. And the other one which is going to make him a traitor.- ArkAnghel1yrReplied to JustThatBoredGuy
- ArkAnghel2yrReplied to SolarXWings
thanks for pointing those errors
This paragraph has been deleted. - ArkAnghel2yrReplied to SIENDONIACh 11 New Skill appear
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Have you ever ride a rollercoaster where it starts slow at the beginning then it started to speed up? in this book you are accelerated immediately. The story threw you directly in there. There are still minor errors but those things are easily fixable nice job You got hooked by the story and I am pretty sure you will stay reading it. I know, because it happens to me. I am a picky reader. I usually have to reread early chapters a few times before I start binge-reading it.
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you can cut this to many sentences to avoid block of words. but the creation of sentences is good.
As he slowly trod down the stairs he started to introduce himself 'Hey my name is Uteki Smith sometimes people tease me at school because of my name but it's a traditional fishman name so I rep it with pride by the way I'm a Fishman you see in a world like mine Fishman are kinda trash no cap it's not like we get beaten and enslaved of course not but there is a certain element of bias against us especially from the stronger races you see there are dozens of different races in my world all with different inherent abilities and affinities but us fishmen well you see our only abilities are to breathe underwater and a small control over water, for example, making big bubbles out of saliva that sort of thing also we can exert a weak poison that would at best make someone feel a bit drowsy but that's a last resort sort of thing for me because well I dont know my mum says it because I don't use it a lot and I have to get used to it but whenever I use it I pretty much K.O myself so there's no point plus we don't have that much talent in well ... anything anyways i live in the kingdom of Legturia there is four kingdoms legturia is home to the the twenty districts mydream is to be the strongest from district twenty. - ArkAnghel2yrPosted
Have you ever ride a rollercoaster where it starts slow at the beginning then it started to speed up? Well, in this book you are accelerated immediately. The story threw you directly in there. You are hooked by the story and I am pretty sure you will stay reading it. I know, because it happens to me. I am a picky reader. I usually have to reread early chapters a few times before I start binge-reading it.
- ArkAnghel2yrReplied to C_wright171717Ch 132 Don't judge until you have fought with it
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- ArkAnghel2yrReplied to C_wright171717Ch 65 A face of dismay
- ArkAnghel2yrReplied to MalladiCh 55 The Candidacy
- ArkAnghel2yrReplied to Enlightened_IdiotCh 13 A Death made to be stronger
- ArkAnghel2yrReplied to Creepy_CuddleBearCh 23 Overwatch
- ArkAnghel2yrReplied to Curt_Best
Well thanks for reading tho, tbh I repeat the shots or how the gun works because I want my readers to feel how strong it is, and because in the future there will be a lot of skills so the readers won't get different ideas or interpretation for other skills.
Ch 70 A face to be revealed - ArkAnghel2yrReplied to Nero_OkitaCh 1 Starting Fresh
- ArkAnghel2yrReplied to RagingReaper
read volume 2
``All I know was the magician can't cast a spell the healer was crying and both of our damage dealers specifically the two swordsmen was knocked down early… that was not training that was a real test if we can survive outside of the wall. But that monster was the modified thing is unbeatable.`` - ArkAnghel2yrReplied to NeoThe1
He used someone account
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