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TagDaReaperLv53yr
2021-05-19 12:34

Story is way too rushed. It has potential but it is ruined by the fast pacing. Everything is happening neck to neck with no break in between. As such, there are many plot holes left.

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yayinVLv4

I agree with a part of you. I think that if this goes at the pace it is going at, it will end before or near chapter 500. It's gonna become a short novel comparatively.

kasukyLv14

True another thing is that all 200 chapter happened in like under a mont…

MingLinLv5

and it's still going strong after 700+, and there will be likely 1.5k+ chapters at this pace, this is one of my daily drug now. Keep reading you won't regret it

CamoblastLv15

Lol, I thought this was going to be rushed too. However, 1000 chapters in and less than a month passing in the novel and his realm only increasing once proved otherwise. Author really dragging the plot on as long as he can.

josue_negronLv15

still reading and i am regretting trowing so.many coins on this novel as its still past the first 2 months and there's explanation chapters for explanations chapters that explans chapters that have detailed information of explaining chapters so i might just dropp now that am all caught up with 1130 chapters and it seems stuck explaining even the undercurrents we should be trying to figure out those that keep readers guessing yeah those dont exist here as everything is very detailedly explaned

MingLin:and it's still going strong after 700+, and there will be likely 1.5k+ chapters at this pace, this is one of my daily drug now. Keep reading you won't regret it
kuuhhLv15

fast paced I think you want to say fast filler yeah. more useless informations, subspecies humans characters introduced for no reason except add trouble to the mc without adding anything to the story or the mc...

NaPAULYunLv14

more like author make more Character Talking to drag the novel

Camoblast:Lol, I thought this was going to be rushed too. However, 1000 chapters in and less than a month passing in the novel and his realm only increasing once proved otherwise. Author really dragging the plot on as long as he can.
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