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Zuzu969
Zuzu969Lv152yr
2022-09-29 03:37

The premis is great but there is too much unnecessary information. Almost a thousand chapters but the story hasn’t even broken two weeks. The chapters are short and honestly most of the time you’re going to get anywhere. The story has great potential and I’m going to continue reading, but yeah.

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IGotStones
4.2
2429 Chs

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Rajveer77554
Rajveer77554Lv4

yah almost the world end Is scenarios are occuring within 2 weeks of his life and author is pulling a single incident into Dozen chapters

1yr
4
Mango_Man_Fantasy
Mango_Man_FantasyLv3

it's still the same 😮‍💨

4mth
3
ISLAME_KING
ISLAME_KINGLv12

its worse know ,you can see that the novel got out if his hand he just write with no plot

Mango_Man_Fantasy:it's still the same 😮‍💨
2mth
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Frank_Trampedach
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Reveal spoiler

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Turtlelover
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Noice novel ‎‎‎ f

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TagDaReaper
TagDaReaperLv5

Story is way too rushed. It has potential but it is ruined by the fast pacing. Everything is happening neck to neck with no break in between. As such, there are many plot holes left.

3yr
SlimePlort
SlimePlortLv3

The story setting is really fun but it's a typical novel of this type. The MC doesn't have to put in any effort to learn to create cards, just automatically being able to 'tell' the best way to make them. And, of course, recipe's come just as naturally to him as breathing. No build-up or effort means no satisfaction from the result, which means you might as well remove the crafting part of the setting and just make it action. Character's don't act like people, and they don't interact like people. Conversations are stilted and unnatural with a lot of author self-inserts that cause the conversations to jump from one point to another. The way they communicate is really hard to stomach. It gives me second-hand embarrassment. It just makes it impossible to be engaged with the story. It's unfortunate. I love crafting stories. But this isn't a crafting story. If the author reads this, this would be a good story if you made the crafting something the MC worked towards consistently over the story's timeline and you improved the way characters interact and communicate. Those are the two points that are really dragging the story down.

3yr
Hatim_T_Pence
Hatim_T_PenceLv1

the only bad thing about this novel is when a character by the name of "Anna" appears in the story: a hoe over 80 years old with a high card level (aka higher cultivation level) who was sleeping with thousands of people over the years and taking the MC hostage for more than 300 chapters because she liked him.

2yr
CraftyAttitude
CraftyAttitudeLv13

Fillers! Fillers! Fillers! to the point of madness. I sort of like this book but also really hate this book. Never seen a story being so blatantly stretched out (maybe there are more out there but I never stuck around long enough to experience it) But I do like the book and it has potential but it could really do without the word salad to meet word count

2yr
Springautumncicada
SpringautumncicadaLv6

This book name should be how to become omnipresent within a month. It's been crossed 1400 chapters but he didn't cross a month in the novel after his transgression.

1yr
DragLord
DragLordLv14

the cover is awesome lol....................................................................................................................

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