Well there seems to be some really unnecessary hard comments here. With no real constructive feedback. I can only speak for myself. I'm not a writer at all. So I respect the work and the time people give to write 150 chapters, so I hope that my review won't be bad received. I enjoyed the pace and the MC. The poetry and the various little implicit comments made this original for me. For me this is a slice of life of Hogwarts professor, and I like that. But one thing that made me pursue reading chapter after chapter and what made the reading really interesting was the fact that Professor Hap doesn't know every single line in every page of the Harry potter's book. Which somewhat makes this protagonist much more believable than what we are used. For instance the photographic memory MCs that we all love. Here it made him feel like a real character in the story and not just an outsider. He is progressively guessing what's going on using his deduction and observations. The chemistry between the different characters are really well done for me, like with Mr. Snape. I would had enjoyed more interactions between Felix and Dumbledore. And I believe that changing the pov sometimes could be interesting as well. Like what sneaky Dumbledore is doing behind our backs, or what he did with the books. Or even hearing about what the death eaters are feeling. Perspective is always good I think, it can bring diversity to the storyline. One thing that I would have enjoyed seeing more is tension or conflicts. There seem to be no threat in this world, like Voldemort doesn't exist and Harry or no one is struggling. We progressively discovered over the first chapters that the MC is powerful, but we didn't really see him being challenged. And I think that the 'threat' that Felix represents for others characters like Snape is an idea that was we'll explored in the beginning, but was a bit forgotten for a whole lot of later chapters. With just some little reminders here and there that the MC brilliance could be a threat like Voldemort. Seeing how the wizarding world could react to the somewhat genius of Felix is something that makes me curious to read. Even though sometimes the story was was a little slow for me, I enjoyed the author take. I had some laugh and was addicted. Harry being inspired by Felix skills in duel is something nice to see. There's no perfect story and even Rowling had a lot of plot issues So I don't think people should be too harsh with fanfic authors, like in some comments that I've read. Overall, for me, the story was consistently good compared to others novels here. I congratulate the author for surviving in this website and for writing so much chapters. I hope that the criticism won't him/her too much. I'm thriving to continue reading the next chapters 😁 It has good potential.
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It's a translation, you talk as if the person posting the story on this site was the author.
