LucasNamikaze

But you have to agree that her punishment is already going beyond the limit, she is going to be r****. I know she was ungrateful, but she no longer has any cultivation, she lost a leg and will stay with Yu Xiaogang for the rest of her life. That in itself is already a punishment, but wanting to justify her being r**** again like she was in the original novel, I think is too much.

You could have kept the name Zamasu as you did with other characters (Lelouch, Mikasa and Mark), it would avoid this kind of misunderstanding.

Do you know what would have been realistic? The protagonist would have been expelled from the game like anyone else in an official championship. Your problem was the protagonist's exaggerated reaction, this is not a training game. Another realistic thing would be his father scolding him after being expelled for his selfish attitude. The protagonist looks like those spoiled and selfish people who throw a tantrum when something doesn't go the way they want. His dual personality also irritates me.

I may be wrong, but I think this happens because most of the time when an MC joins a crew, the authors limit their protagonist so as not to become stronger than the crew's captain, which doesn't happen when the MC is the captain. Since it is not necessary to limit the strength to equal or be below the captain.

I agree with you, I completely lost the desire to continue reading this fanfic. The author did everything to transform Xunji into a good person, so much so that many people who read this fanfic felt sorry for him, I can't even read this fanfic without feeling a little disgusted, 80 chapters of pure brainwashing, all to make us feel pity the trash called Qian Xunji, as if that wasn't enough to turn the victim into a villain. Furthermore, not even to have a decent protagonist, I know he was a child when he died, but he knew the whole story and not just him, Qian Renxue too, and yet they treated the whole matter as if it were nothing. The thing is, they never once thought about Bibi Dong's feelings, especially Renxue, because as a woman she should understand how disgusting Xunji was.

I'm a little disappointed with the story. What did I expect when I started reading this fanfic? Well, I expected a greater focus on the romance between the protagonist and Tsunade, but there is almost no interaction between the two, except when the author needs the protagonist to receive a new power or ability to help with the plot. The story didn't need to be just about the romance, as that would be boring, but I expected more, not just something to be used to give the protagonist powers and abilities when convenient. But the story isn't bad, it just wasn't what I expected to read when I saw the title. I wrote this comment using Google Translate.

Your friend Kid is one of those bloodthirsty pirates and you're proud of him, hypocrite.

I don't care if it's 1 waifu or 1000, my problem is that she's an OC, there are so many waifus in Bleach and the protagonist's only love interest being an OC kind of makes no sense to me, I'll read a few more chapters and with that I'll go see if I continue reading or not.

I see, so the love interest is an OC, so I don't think this story is for me, one of the reasons why I find HOTD interesting is because of the female characters in the story, and from what I understand, your main character will relate with an OC character and the original protagonist (Takashi) will keep the harem he had in the series. As I said before, I haven't read the story, but from what I've seen you answer in other comments, I don't think I'll like the situation of seeing Takashi getting all the main heroines, while Shiro gets an OC character. I won't change my 5 star rating, I hope this helps your story rating. I'm really sorry, but I'd rather not read than see a situation I'm sure I won't like. Good luck with your fanfic.