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as_ssLv12yr
2022-02-26 18:36

it started of good but quickly became completely dog shi.

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F_E_X_ALv11

True... It started super well... Alas like many Author, they only consider a few arcs ahead. Any further, it's just gonna break their stucture. For they have barely any in the first place. (Not well thought out)

Lucky_OctoNuggetLv4

that's kinda why fanfics sre fanfics tho. If you want something with a super thought out plot and actually full throughout plot line, go read an actual book like LOTM

F_E_X_A:True... It started super well... Alas like many Author, they only consider a few arcs ahead. Any further, it's just gonna break their stucture. For they have barely any in the first place. (Not well thought out)
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