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Paradox_
Paradox_Author11mth
2024-01-15 13:20

My honest review (still biased). Naturally, with respect to fanfictions, I'd round it to 4/5. It is a different timeline than most One Piece fanfics with a more driven MC, lest he is swept away by the turbulent seas. The recently posted chapters are a rewrite, thus ANY review before this one is outdated and inaccurate. I suggest reading the first arc, chapters 1-11, to get a taste of the story and whether it is for you. Check out the Disclaimers chapter for more information. Thanks for stopping by.

One Piece: Path to Power

Paradox_
4.8
179 Chs

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ichigo7ma
ichigo7maLv4

I was surprised when I saw this novel. I have been I waiting a long time I've lost hope. But when I see your novel again 🌋that is Best thing happened today And I hope you will make this novel the best of fanfıc 🌹

11mth
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ArimaKossei
ArimaKosseiLv4

this is it!!! the one piece fanfic years ago that was so popular!!

11mth
21
Kenji_Kun
Kenji_KunLv4

Broski back again. . . man I can't wait to read this fic again Gon be a mad journey if man ain't gotten rusty in the last few years

11mth
15
Minazuki_Ragnarok
Minazuki_RagnarokLv4

almighty paradox has returned with the best one piece fanfiction

11mth
8
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Thank you for coming back bro

11mth
6
Corbin_Smith
Corbin_SmithLv14

glad you're back, best one piece fic I've read.

11mth
6
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

pretty sure this was completed already.

11mth
HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

no it twasnt

Humbuub:pretty sure this was completed already.
11mth
3
HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

image sause?

Kenji_Kun:Broski back again. . . man I can't wait to read this fic again Gon be a mad journey if man ain't gotten rusty in the last few years
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11mth
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LeonTheDarkFlame
LeonTheDarkFlameLv4

You're back let's go! can't wait for this

11mth
3
DaoistZpE06Z
DaoistZpE06ZLv1

It’s a manhwa [ Legend of the northern blade ]

HangerBaby:image sause?
11mth
2
Manik_Sethi_9015
Manik_Sethi_9015Lv12

can u give name of discord

11mth
Rillik
RillikLv4

less goo, you are back

11mth
machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Who is in the harem?

10mth
6
IDaGoat_Mypark
IDaGoat_MyparkLv15

I love this story, the remake is even better. Have you ever thought of doing patreon or something similar? I know that I would be willing to pay for more chapters earlier. I’m sure others would agree.

9mth
IMDOOMED
IMDOOMEDLv14

No system fanfiction is mediocre; it's the readers who are mediocre. Every system fanfiction I've read has been exceptional. I've never understood why so many people complain about it. Novels without a system can be excellent, but they don't surpass those with one; that's a fact. If one can have the assistance of the system, why waste precious time on tasks that could be accomplished more efficiently with the system? Are you unaware that mortals have a limited lifespan? Author, if the system doesn't provide significant assistance or possess considerable power, it's inappropriate to label your fiction with the "system" tag. This tag should only be used when the system significantly aids the main character, especially for readers specifically seeking novels with such tags. Moreover, if you're among those readers who dislike systems, there's no point in incorporating one only to weaken it. It's truly futile. You may consider abandoning the project altogether and removing the system tag to avoid confusing readers like myself who are seeking a novel with a powerful system.

9mth
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Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

I guess that since it is 16+ = no lemons???? or will you give a warning first?

7mth
Starvation
StarvationLv10

glad you're back man. I was up to date with the old one, hmm, should I start from 0 ?

7mth
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KasiCair
KasiCairLv1

Hello. Is the old version accessible somewhere or did you take it down?

5mth
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OtsutsukiGOD
OtsutsukiGODLv4

what in the name of holy joker is this? is thin another account of holy joker? or is this stolen?

4mth
Other Reviews
Melshan
MelshanLv7

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Waifu Boa Hancock

3yr

Harvez
HarvezLv1

The best fan fiction on van peace that I have read in my life. I won't say anything about grammar, since I read with the help of a translator, which makes it almost impossible to notice mistakes, but the writing style is very pleasant to the eye. The character of the characters is very natural and there is no feeling that the author has changed them for the sake of his plot. The very infusion of MC into the plot also feels natural, which is very good. The beginning may seem cringe, as well as the actions of the main character in the first chapters may cause some to discard this fan fiction, but then the author has greatly improved. The battle scenes are written beautifully, the improvement of the main character's strength is consistent and fast, but it does not go beyond the OP. Romance also pleases, although the author constantly writes that such scenes are not given to him, for me they look very nice.

3yr
Dave_Guest
Dave_GuestLv14

A really good start for a fanfic. Nice devil fruit. Good Talent. I hope the System wont dictate his life, because the strength of the people in One Piece fluctuate very much. And I hope his cheats wont become too rediculous. I like the curse release and a bloodline. I hope he works hard for his power.

3yr
SOSboa
SOSboaLv3

Dope, sincerely I hope it's not dropped like every promising one piece fic. By the way, for those considering dropping the story because of the system at the start being a bit much, don't it gets better, a lot better. The greatest thing about this fic is when it's set, rocks pirate era is so interesting and something I've never seen explored. Forget all those joining the strawhats fics I need more rocks fanfics.

3yr
schizocat
schizocatLv2

An utterly unnecessary rewrite. The author took a one year hiatus in order to organize everything and rewrite. The previous one was already pretty good, the author could've just gradually improved their writing and the quality of the story by releasing chapters regularly. However, they said they wanted some time to rewrite everything because they wanted the whole book to be consistent in its quality. The result? This ridiculous... thing? Honestly, I'm incredibly disappointed since this was one of my favorite fanfics and the previous one certainly managed to tug at my emotional strings, but this one isn't doing it at all. The incorrect use of adjectives and certain verbs isn't helping with the immersion, the characters that were properly fleshed out in the previous writing weren't even fleshed out properly (e.g. Whitebeard vs Borealis), the world-building is worse compared to the previous one, and the story development and pacing is all over the place, it feels like you don't know what they'll do next (not in a good way) and since everthing just happens all of a sudden without a proper build up or suspense, the story ends up feeling lackluster compared to the previous one, a shadow of its former self. To conclude, this is a rewrite that turned out for the worse. WAY WORSE. If you expect this'll be as good as the previous one, just read something else and save your time.

7mth
TianGuez
TianGuezLv2

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Donflamingo1304
Donflamingo1304Lv13

The best onde piece fic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
nacht
nachtLv14

i am tired reading cliche of mc parents died, i thought this story will be different since author said that he hated weak mc parents but it seems it's my misunderstanding what the author mean.

3yr
sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv3

asking if its harem and will he get devil fruit and if gets which prefered and does he go around playing hero or is he luffys underling i need info so i dont waste time not prefered

3yr
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