They are poor mortals with a mind of poor imagination, you cannot require them to think or use their brain, they want realism in a fanfic of a fictional story HAHA

The plot is very good, but the best thing is the translator's editing work, I almost didn't think it was a Chinese fanfic, spectacular work and thank you very much for taking the time to translate properly.

Thanks for the chapter

Cononically the newspapers in Marvel are all a bunch of ignorant and ïdiøts, JJ is a great example

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There is a lot of "realism" poorly implemented here, as soon as the MC arrives he has a "mental breakdown" in which he cries, screams and punches the air for 20 minutes straight next to Jazmín, apparently the author thought it was a good idea to start his story like this but personally I disliked everything, time to start the story, terrible idea to have the MC have a "realistic" tantrum next to a dying person for 20 minutes only to then abuse that unconscious person with the excuse of "helping her", I think we all know how to give someone unconscious a drink, they teach it on television and any media on the internet, you simply have to lift the unconscious person's upper part and lightly massage their throat so that the liquid passes into the stomach, kisses to give water only work in romantic anime, also I remember that they teach the correct way to give water to someone unconscious in a swimming anime. The MC, is a Japanese with minimal mental resistance Otaku high school student (basically any trash anime protagonist)... I think the author still doesn't know that when you put all those characteristics together you only generate massive repulsion from all normal people, I think I already made my dislike for the protagonist evident, so now I will say the reason why I will stop reading, In this story there is a system, everything is okay but... It has mandatory missions, basically it is a story with an MC slave to the system, plus the mandatory missions have serious punishments which further increases my dislike for the chosen plot by the author, A system that enslaves its MC to compulsorily complete tasks is basically the opposite of what any normal person is looking for, who would want to be enslaved by a higher entity and have to comply with everything that entity wants without the possibility of resisting? I believe that no one

Okay, I guess my effort to continue reading ends here, I hate systems with mandatory missions and also with penalties

Honestly I would stop reading the moment you decided to write the MC's consecutive tantrums, It is unpleasant to read, I think you applied too much realism, so much so that the reaction is exaggerated, it is like what we all imagine would happen in a mental breakdown, I think that making it less realistic would make everything more fluid, realism is a good resource but you can't apply it to the entire fanfic because obviously this is a fanfic

I don't remember much but Midoriya did faint several times just from interacting with other people, at the time it seemed too exaggerated and I couldn't bear to read any more

Thanks for the chapter brother

The original starts well but halfway through it becomes garbage, you can start reading it and abandon the novel when you feel like you can't stand reading anymore, I did that.

Here bro, you need it

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I really hope with all my desire that you know how to carry this story forward, the original was a waste of material, Its author started the story well but halfway through he returned to yet another ordinary novel, you have all my support to continue this fanfic 💪💪

Finally someone does something with this world, I hated and loved the original, the MC irritated me a lot and I abandoned reading it after the MC starts fighting, from that moment on the novel became un thash, I hope you make a long fanfic with a better MC and a better plot, I would hate for a fanfic about this world to be wasted

It's better if you don't know, it's a cancer of the platform

Clearly not

I already made it clear, in addition to not liking the plot, the story is poorly presented, the scenes are strange as they do not give the full context of the situation and what is happening around the scene (I'm not talking about a particular scene, I'm talking about almost everything I read up to the chapter I took a screenshot of), It is as if you had a book where you write down all the ideas that occur to you and then present them one after the other without stopping to slowly and clearly explain the situation, everything is very spontaneous, you should give more time to the plot and not rush the story, the reader needs to breathe and not receive so much stimulation because you only make the reader feel rejection, at least that's how it is in my reading experience, not slow, at a normal rhythm, slow when it has to be slow and fast when it has to be fast.

You can read at your own risk, the author decided to clarify the plot of the fanfic in the middle and not at the beginning so here I leave you what you will find in this fanfic, It's definitely not my cup of tea nor will it ever be, I hate when there are stories where the author seal the memories of the MC, I think it is a basic and lazy resource on the part of the author. Additionally, the story has horrible grammar and story structure, this story urgently needs a rewrite and reorganization of the events and how they are presented, it's disastrous.