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Nwodo_TonyLv24yr
2021-03-19 22:35

wow your storyline is nice and the story nice too, the best place I like about the story is chapter two when you talked about the black hole , wow your pacing your writing style marveled me, sincerely it marveled me , .well I will dm you some constructive criticism on discord..👍(of course there are some)

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