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FluffyFatCat
FluffyFatCatLv14yr
2021-02-19 20:07

I don't mind an opening begins with an action scenes, but this was a little bit too long, which make the phase a little bit slower. But overall, the grammar is perfect, the story was unique and interesting, and as an MMORPG player, necromancer is my favorite hero.

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Zerga3
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Author's in-depth review of his own book. Pros: 1. Stability: I will update every day around (GMT+9). As of now, I will be posting only one chap a day, however, it may change in the future. 2. I will be answering every comment regarding my novel Cons: 1.Expect grammar mistakes, I usually mess up the tenses. However, I will try to improve myself during our journey. 2. Pacing will sometimes differ, but it's mostly a slow-paced story with a few time skips. 3. The beginning may be cliche and that's what probably forces everyone to drop this story, but I assure you that in the later chapters it takes a completely new and original way. 4. Plot holes- I do have an outline with a possible ending. However, my emotions fluctuate during writing so I can change a few things, which is the possible reasons why the plot holes may appear in this story(I will be editing if needed) 5. This story more focuses on the whole story and characters than the system. 6. No harem- I am not sure if it's bad, but I've had enough of harem stories. But it doesn't mean mc will be a loner. However, the story is based more on the action so don't expect much. ****** Note:/Please don't spam reviews/ /If you do a review of my story, please point out the reasons as to why you rated it so highly or lowly/ Also, don't forget to play some music before hopping into reading my story. Enjoy!

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PsyLoRD
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NEVER HUNGER! NEVER TIRE! NEVER FEAR!

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bluerabyss
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Hi! This story is great and had a very interesting plot. The start is also good and it is worth reading specially to those who likes a system novel. Keep up the great work Author 😊😊

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Interesting read so far. It's easy to get drawn into which is always a good thing. An excellent example of an urban fantasy, really good book. Expect a bright future for you in novel writing

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I love it! And i must say i love the sci-fi setting it makes me imagine things more creatively[img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]

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Nice! very interesting story, please continue to update more, I added this to my library, so I hope this book gets a good rank, never give up, and keep up the good work!

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This novel got me hooked. love the action scenes at the start. five stars because it deserves. The story is so well written. it's worth reading it. keep going Author

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