Author's in-depth review of his own book. Pros: 1. Stability: I will update every day around (GMT+9). As of now, I will be posting only one chap a day, however, it may change in the future. 2. I will be answering every comment regarding my novel Cons: 1.Expect grammar mistakes, I usually mess up the tenses. However, I will try to improve myself during our journey. 2. Pacing will sometimes differ, but it's mostly a slow-paced story with a few time skips. 3. The beginning may be cliche and that's what probably forces everyone to drop this story, but I assure you that in the later chapters it takes a completely new and original way. 4. Plot holes- I do have an outline with a possible ending. However, my emotions fluctuate during writing so I can change a few things, which is the possible reasons why the plot holes may appear in this story(I will be editing if needed) 5. This story more focuses on the whole story and characters than the system. 6. No harem- I am not sure if it's bad, but I've had enough of harem stories. But it doesn't mean mc will be a loner. However, the story is based more on the action so don't expect much. ****** Note:/Please don't spam reviews/ /If you do a review of my story, please point out the reasons as to why you rated it so highly or lowly/ Also, don't forget to play some music before hopping into reading my story. Enjoy!
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LIKEReply to sxxxxxx. Hi, First of all, the situation with Sophia is indeed pretty rushed so I will try to edit it a bit and try to make it more reasonable. While the reincarnation, I can assure you, is not random and the reason behind it will be explained in the latter chaps(near the end of the book) Thanks for the critizism and I hope to see you in the latter part of the story. If you have any other problems, feel free to point them out. It’s deeply appreciated.
