Item: 漢語;
Rating: 5
Author: bluerabyss

bluerabyssLv34yr

2021-02-19 21:23

Hi! This story is great and had a very interesting plot. The start is also good and it is worth reading specially to those who likes a system novel. Keep up the great work Author 😊😊

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