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Mel_Aniv
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2021-02-12 15:10

After reading for a while, I observed that the author improved with his writings. It was difficult at first but you will get the hang of it in the future. With few edits and finishing touches, this will improve in terms of quality! I gotta say I'm inpressed with the author's growth! What a nice feeling of your brethren improving!

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Mel_Aniv
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BTW, Please vote again tomorrow okay? See yah!

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Aww. Thank you so much. Greatly appreciated this review💞

Aeipathy_02
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Sure how long will the contest last? I'll continue to give my full support 💞. And btw since your book is in contest how long did you wait for it to be finished in the vetting process?

Mel_Aniv:BTW, Please vote again tomorrow okay? See yah!
Mel_Aniv
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OH the contest will end in 4 days....Please support until it ends. The vetting process will be one working day. The problem was this week was a chinese holiday so it will take longer.

Aeipathy_02:Sure how long will the contest last? I'll continue to give my full support 💞. And btw since your book is in contest how long did you wait for it to be finished in the vetting process?
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

No problem! And thank you very much.

Aeipathy_02:Aww. Thank you so much. Greatly appreciated this review💞
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