Review based on what i have read so far ( chapter 60+) It's my personal opinion so if you have anything against on what I'm going to say you can write your own review 1. the world background- can't say much since the story is in early stage. So far I like how the author described the world setting, events and characters interaction. 2. pacing of the story- as a reader, personally, i feel like the author did a great job regulating this. It's not so slow where you'll be skipping words for unwanted fillers. It's not so fast where you'll feel like you missed out something. It's the best a reader can ask for, we'll, aside from the cliffhangers. 3. MC's character development- looking at things the way they progressed. His character development is understandable for me, for short i like the way the mc progress. He's a bit edgy at times, it's expected given how he lived his life up to this point. Hoping there will be some progress between him and a certain someone, i will not give a name but she's very likeable. 4. MC's system- there are not much interaction between the mc and the system unlike other novels. It has its own advantages for the mc just like every other mc, but it's not up to the point where i will call it OP. MC still has to do his part to gain something. 5. Characters surrounding the mc- they are not plain to read. They have their own depth and mystery that will make you want to know more about them. Of course, we can't forget about the stepping stones for our mc, some of them are stupid as usual while some are smart and think for themselves when to back out- unlike the stupid ones. The mc is ruthless and i like it, im not really into naive and goody-two-shoes kind. Realistically speaking, if you look at every great person at the top in our current world despite their different attitudes they all have similarities if you study them. Yes they act and do good things to look good in front of us but is that really there is? No, i think not, they're just good at hiding their worse side from our plain eyes. Every person at the top knew both the black and white of life. As what Niccolo Machiavelli said "a wise prince should be both fear and love".
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LIKECharacter development is good? The author went with the absolute worse, most pathetic person he could write so when he puts 1+1 and gets 2 it would look like some miracle and be "Character Growth". How is that character growth? It just makes it seem so much worse that without the system he would be nothing, NOTHING.
based on the latest chapters now, the MC has no romantic feelings yet to anyone. But there's already a hint for a love interest, it's not his focus yet or he just doesn't realize it himself. But this someone, aside from his mentor, he opens up with. He even helps her improve.
The_Starters:when will the mc falls in love!!??
please don't tell me its angy, she may be a good girl but i don't think she has fml personality- cant follow mc's steps, i would go for someone like aimee-strong and ruthless
xxReedxx:based on the latest chapters now, the MC has no romantic feelings yet to anyone. But there's already a hint for a love interest, it's not his focus yet or he just doesn't realize it himself. But this someone, aside from his mentor, he opens up with. He even helps her improve.
hey, I don't like spoilers myself but I have to ask this to give me the drive to continue reading. Is Angie the love interest?
xxReedxx:welcome, you might not like the MC from the start. He's an edgy kid with some issues, but just be patient. I'm at the latest chaps and he's development is quite good
Well honestly, long winded reviews always make me weary of the book, surely you dont have to give an essay about how the book feels to you. were you asked to do it? I mean i can make a better around review where its 10x shorter and leaves people interested enough to want to try the book. Surely you can do the same.