grammer, maybe a few here and there, English isn't my first language nor am i too proficient so as long as it's readable and fluid then i really don't care for the small mistakes so 5/5.
character design, the character design is dog shit. it's too bad, even most eastern fantasy novels aren't that bad, i don't even know where to start...actually i do, i will start from the very first few paragraphs. the author starts with a "glimpse" of the future of how in 3 years the MC is gonna be op and guess what the people chant his name as? they call him "crimson lord" dude, the cringe level was so high it covered me like a coat, it would have been ironically less edgy if the people chanted "edge lord" lmao.
he took the "im trash so i get abused and bullied" way too fuken far and he didn't give valid excuses yet. forget committing suicide, I'm surprised that he's alive, and for someone as "trash" as him, why does everybody put so much energy into torturing him and putting him an inch away from life and their lives revolve around it like wtf?!
also, the author like to tell rather than show, he says that the mc is smart but the mc keeps on doing dumb and stupid things.
when it comes to other characters, if they aren't literally trying to kill the mc ust because he has a "trash" power, they are shitting on him about why he still didn't kill himself. and all of them are very obnoxious like holy shit, i would have killed myself whether i have a strong or weak power by virtue of me having to hear these people talk on a daily basis.
that goes for the system too, it's annoying as ****. overall 3/5 just cuz i think there is potential for the story and i don't want to lower the rating too much
stability...well it's pretty stable let's hope it stays that way, for now, there haven't been too many chapters.5/5
story development, i like the fact that it's gonna have to do with space soon enough and meeting new species so on and so forth and that's mostly where the 4 starts to come from, i took only 1 star which is something very generous as what we saw in the first chapter as a glimpse to the future was hella cringe but i can see many ways the author can improve upon it so by the time it's the period where the glimpse of the future showed, he could change things so it isn't as cringe. also, the story is very very forced, like a constipated person trying to take a shit.