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2021-01-13 08:24

Its over 30 chapters of training montage with plot points occuring in between. Most of the story reads like a long but fun progress report. I'm assuming it will become a bit more in the moment when it reaches the moment the series start. But if not, then atleast the story technically checks out even if it may not have much dialogue between characters .

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HavocHUN
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Considering the original story the first 8 years nothing happened to Naruto. I tried building something interesting and making the training readable, but I can't really go against the actual plot in a meaningful way. The story will start soon and the events start rolling in.

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

will this fanfic be just naruto or will mc travel to other worlds in the future?

HavocHUN:Considering the original story the first 8 years nothing happened to Naruto. I tried building something interesting and making the training readable, but I can't really go against the actual plot in a meaningful way. The story will start soon and the events start rolling in.
Uncle_potato33
Uncle_potato33Lv15

You absolutely have a readable story but you have zero percent chance enough story to be enjoyable a reborn Naruto story that barely meets the waves thats the 100% truth full stop

HavocHUN:Considering the original story the first 8 years nothing happened to Naruto. I tried building something interesting and making the training readable, but I can't really go against the actual plot in a meaningful way. The story will start soon and the events start rolling in.
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