Sooo, the story is quite nice Grammar and flow could need a little work tho. Quality wise it's ok, there are some Errors in it that makes it necessary to read the paragraph a few times to get the meaning but it's nothing worldbreaking in my opinion. The Characters and world building is also nice at least for the main world, hell even the interludes are a nice touch and i generally hate multi POV. The Romance is a bit forced and feels cold, kinda like the relationship with the MC family, it's not bad but it feels like he just goes thru the motions, with all his powers an upgrade for his mother or teaching his sister a few things slowly would have been nice, at this point his father in law knows more about him than his Mother. The biggest issue of the story tho is the flow. Some Arcs like the RUNE arc are totally overdrawn to the point that it get boring. Other arcs like the Harry Potter ones leave so much potential on the floor that it's just sad. Just for an example: Space expansion Magic, a Tent, House elf's, the Hollows ( because the MC is already liked by death). So yeah some worlds are to long others are so short that they don't matter and the training Montage all the times disrupts the flow of the story. It's not story breaking for me, but the RUNE arc was a pain after some point. I'm glad is stuck to the story because I still enjoy it, but not gonna lie, i thought about dropping it at that time. So is it a good story, than yes. It has a few problems but it's still interesting to read even is you have to ignore a few logic holes here and there. So yeah I will keep reading and as the story progresses the flow did get a bit better so I think the Autor is working on it anyway. 4/5 stars
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