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WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv114yr
2021-03-06 01:32

Most identic story development and character design farm a well written novel with a good plot that's why it hurts more them total trash novel out there.... following points bothered me ... 1. 10 chapter wasted only to get 5 to 6 ruins from a world i don't even know of ,so i skipped it because it was boring 2. after huge knowledge of harry potter world did he even need the ruins? 3. starting world was more interesting then that mmorpg shit world 4. character development is even more stupid for example: mc says i will not marry your daughter because i don't know her well.... next time he talks to female lead laughs at his joke he is ready to marry her 5. very unclear fight's and very little effort is need to create bonds between people 6. WHY THE FUCK DO YOU HAVE TO DO POKIMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lord Who Visit Another World

LuxVonDeux
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Alberto_Kalach
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Hey man i was of the same opinion buT i continued reading and it got pretty good plus the pokemon part iS diferent from what you expect

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WN_grdy_mthr_fker
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Well I stopped after pokiman

Alberto_Kalach:Hey man i was of the same opinion buT i continued reading and it got pretty good plus the pokemon part iS diferent from what you expect
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