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2021-08-12 22:16

Here is a guy who can make himself have the capabality of a GOD with all the oppurtunities his Dimension hopping can bring.. And now his playing humanity and limiting himself, knowingly he can fix all pesky problems if his really trying his best and to lessen the casualty of his people. Cause right now all i see is a guy playing Kingdom building on a game and not a guy whos living in it. If you want a story and can handle and ignore a UNIVERSE SIZE plothole the author forced to the story due to his ability, then read it. Other than those plothole everything is great.

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