Like the story. But then we have another reincarnated characters, the princess, while she's not a b*tch for now, the fact that she can see other people status and thus know all the MC ability aside from things relate to his pocket dimension and the MC has no clue about it ruined it for me. I always hate it when MC secret is out in the open due to whatever BS plot.
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that's indeed off putting but not a problem for me thanks tho
As long as the secret of his reincarnation and the pocket dimension stays a secret the others don't matter nearly as much. Although her having that knowledge is a bit uncomfortable it's still fine
Like the other guy said, as long as the pocket dimension and his reincarnation remains a secret its fine. The other reincanatee makes it even better. The princesses think she reincarnated in a spin-off of an otome game she liked.
So you gave 5 stars when you don't like character design. You really don't care or your rating is 0 and 1. You either give good review or give nothing.
Hello, I said I like the story but it still has some flaw as I mentioned, there's no reason to give a low review just because there's one point in it that I do not like is there? I gave "character development" 2 stars because of that, but the back ground ,update stability and such is high so the point end up like that, what can I do?
I am saying that people give to high ratings. It's not good for authors either... It's better to give less stars on flawed points to let author grow in char dev or world building. You say... 'There are flaws' but you give almost 5 stars/5 stars. Author brain probably ignores your words as it's good enough already. Anyway, it's only my opinion or advice. I tend to give lower ratings with some feedback. You can just spam 5 stars as you want for those exp. Your choice. I don't know why... I always tend to comment on things. I think maybe I can change mindset of one person. Whatever. Enjoy your reading.
2 stars on CD... I might be too harsh on world dev part in fanfics. I feel like it should be something like WM - world modification. Stability is probably 5 and TQ is five. Story... I didn't read too far. Lost interest. I don't know... I just have times like this. I can read really bad novels without problem...yet sometimes I am not compatible with some novels. I just lose interest after first 4 chapters or so. Have fun reading. I might wrote previous reply with little misunderstanding.
No, he reveals everything to others. Even the princess learns that he is reincarnated. He's just a simp. This story is not worth the time.
