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iFeelMyDlCKGrowing
iFeelMyDlCKGrowingLv113yr
2021-01-12 09:59

Não sei se é permitida a review em outras línguas diferentes da original, porém venho aqui falar o por que você, que fala português, deve ler esta obra. (Tente ler em inglês, não traduza, além de manter a intenção original do autor na tradução, você ainda treina seu inglês, a obra tem uma leitura fácil, leve e imersiva, logo no primeiro capítulo você acaba fascinado com o mundo.) - Protagonista Ingênuo porém não é irritante, acaba gerando uma sensação de leveza que jamais vi antes em uma webnovel; - O autor descreve muito bem o mundo; - Não existem clichês óbvios e jogados na historia a torto e direito; - O desenvolvimento de personagem é incrível, levando em conta que o protagonista é aleijado desde os 7 anos, tendo pouco conhecimento sobre o mundo. A sensação de descobrir os plots que o autor preparou é maravilhosa;

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