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Whats the title of the raw novel?

Read till the end via, author axed it 1/3 of the way through the plot he had planned due to not liking the direction where he was going with said plot. Closest we get is kissing but we do get more of a confirmation of their relationship bout chapter 200ish. Interactions and conversations do get better later on. Early on its...weird and akaward with how things are. Which is why I'm honestly disappointed it got axed.

Don't be trash and not even get the original novel translated correctly.

The beginning is extremely rough and diffcult to follow.There is very scarce amount of despriptions for character or scenes. Novel also neeeds better indication of when PoV swaps or when it focuses on a different character in another scene. Story is ok but MC not as clever as people think he really is. "Show not tell" only work if the character does some big brain plays. Instead MC blindly trusts others and tells of his secrets without building up any trust between him and the other person. Really really needs more scene descriptions.

Ahhhh thanks

Where tho???

Where tho

Coins

Thanks for the chapter

Quite Sastifying.