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John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv134yr
2021-01-22 07:15

Todays date is 1/21/2021 and their are 39 chapters released so far. I have read 37 of them. I am very very exited about this novel so I may be a bit biased. For writing quality I think the author has done a fine job. Also I have not seen any mistakes but I am not the best with English grammar. Updates are a bit slow with the author releasing them every two to three days at a time but the author has said that it will pick up after they get more written. Story development is good. It is a bit faster than I expected only with the mc leveling pretty fast (it is explained with his abilities(the author includes a nice balance to a great skill) and I do not think it would take the mc that long to reach the level cap before the end of the major ark but I am sure that may not be the actual level cap, and I am only 37 chapters in so a lot could change. To truly now what I am talking about you would have to read it. Which I recommend. Character design is good I did not see any problem with it as of now. It can be improved but this is not why I am reading the novel so it is not a major concern of mine. The author does a good job describing the monsters also. World background is top notch. Very good. Information is important that words cannot describe it entirely. So I think having the mc utilize the information he has would be integral to the story. I am not saying that the mc does not already but I am looking forward to how the mc moves forward from here. Here is to power, cheers "Know thy self, know thy enemy. A thousand battles, a thousand victories." Thank you to the author for writing such a wonderful start to this novel that has so much potential that it is bursting out of the seems with it. Live long and prosper.

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IMightBeGod
IMightBeGodLv3

thanks for this helpful review i think i will read this.

BLACKangelmarl
BLACKangelmarlLv12

Hi can you do a review on my novel please, I just need to know what others think of my novel. It's called CONQEROR. Yeah, it's wrong spelling. I already corrected it in the platform where I write. But they told they can't change it, yeah that's why it's CONQEROR.

John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv13

What is the platform?

BLACKangelmarl:Hi can you do a review on my novel please, I just need to know what others think of my novel. It's called CONQEROR. Yeah, it's wrong spelling. I already corrected it in the platform where I write. But they told they can't change it, yeah that's why it's CONQEROR.
BLACKangelmarl
BLACKangelmarlLv12

I mean, a website where I write my novel. But the novel is in her in webnovel. I hope you can give it a review.

John_Smith_3884:What is the platform?
Ouroboros001
Ouroboros001Lv12

This review sounds fake as ****. So little substance.

John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv13

Well if you have any questions about my review you can ask them.

Ouroboros001:This review sounds fake as ****. So little substance.
Ouroboros001
Ouroboros001Lv12

4.5 stars. Is this the best book you've read in years? No issues and you just read every chapter over and over? Because that's what you sound like. You didn't offer anything constructive in your review and seemed to like everything. Sounds fake.

John_Smith_3884:Well if you have any questions about my review you can ask them.
John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv13

I offered my opinion on the novel and I provided arguments/points for why I put them at that. Is their anything specific you have a problem with or do you just not like it overall? If you do not like anything in my review at all then that is fine too. On this website some of the novels are free and I enjoy them so I right a review. Although I have not made a living off of anything related to novels I think my review could help those who are deciding whether or not to read the novel or get more information about the book. I have also read more books here then I probably should so its not like I am completely new to books. If the author has an issue with my review I can also take down the review.

Ouroboros001:4.5 stars. Is this the best book you've read in years? No issues and you just read every chapter over and over? Because that's what you sound like. You didn't offer anything constructive in your review and seemed to like everything. Sounds fake.
Ouroboros001
Ouroboros001Lv12

My issue is that your review feels fake as someone prospectively looking to read the series. Like seeing a bunch of worthless five-star glowing reviews for a novel worthless. You had no hangups in your post. I can't be clearer. However, what the author does is their prerogative.

John_Smith_3884:I offered my opinion on the novel and I provided arguments/points for why I put them at that. Is their anything specific you have a problem with or do you just not like it overall? If you do not like anything in my review at all then that is fine too. On this website some of the novels are free and I enjoy them so I right a review. Although I have not made a living off of anything related to novels I think my review could help those who are deciding whether or not to read the novel or get more information about the book. I have also read more books here then I probably should so its not like I am completely new to books. If the author has an issue with my review I can also take down the review.
John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv13

Well I did say that I might be a bit biased at the start of the review. Yes thinking about it more I probably could have mentioned more things that I did not like or had problems with. At the time I did not have any problems and so far only the release rate is a bit problematic personally but if it ensures good quality then I am willing to make that trade off and so far it has been a ok trade. I was hesitant about charactor design but in my opinion it is fine. The author is giving a lot of opportunities to get a chapter a head of schedule. speaking of schedules the author is consitant. Still I do appreciate you being civil about your questions. It is appreciated. The review system here has I think five area you can give a one out of five on. So if you would like to ask about one of those five then I will do my best to answer.

Ouroboros001:My issue is that your review feels fake as someone prospectively looking to read the series. Like seeing a bunch of worthless five-star glowing reviews for a novel worthless. You had no hangups in your post. I can't be clearer. However, what the author does is their prerogative.
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

[img=faceslap] 2/5

MN_1223
MN_1223Author

No issue from my side, TBH I liked your personal indepth review and even pinned it as top 3 reviews for this novel. I am glad that you liked it. Since there are those that like this novel, it's common that there will those who dislike it or even hate it. It's just that my novel didn't match their taste. So, no need to bother about their negative opinions on this Novel.

John_Smith_3884:I offered my opinion on the novel and I provided arguments/points for why I put them at that. Is their anything specific you have a problem with or do you just not like it overall? If you do not like anything in my review at all then that is fine too. On this website some of the novels are free and I enjoy them so I right a review. Although I have not made a living off of anything related to novels I think my review could help those who are deciding whether or not to read the novel or get more information about the book. I have also read more books here then I probably should so its not like I am completely new to books. If the author has an issue with my review I can also take down the review.
Jack0fAllTrades
Jack0fAllTradesLv11

is the mc kind? or calculative and can kill if necessary?

John_Smith_3884:Well if you have any questions about my review you can ask them.
John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv13

The mc is kind. The mc is also calculating but not to the extent of it being something that defines everything the mc does. So far the mc can kill and does not make it seem like it is the biggest revelation in doing so. It is calmly done when compared to other novels. When I say calmly I mean it is thought out while also not taking ages. Does this answer your question?

Jack0fAllTrades:is the mc kind? or calculative and can kill if necessary?
Jack0fAllTrades
Jack0fAllTradesLv11

Yes, yes it does. Thank you kind sir

John_Smith_3884:The mc is kind. The mc is also calculating but not to the extent of it being something that defines everything the mc does. So far the mc can kill and does not make it seem like it is the biggest revelation in doing so. It is calmly done when compared to other novels. When I say calmly I mean it is thought out while also not taking ages. Does this answer your question?
John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv13

It was not a problem.

Jack0fAllTrades:Yes, yes it does. Thank you kind sir
Mytici
MyticiLv14

You're right. I like your review so just know not everyone is like that guy

John_Smith_3884:I offered my opinion on the novel and I provided arguments/points for why I put them at that. Is their anything specific you have a problem with or do you just not like it overall? If you do not like anything in my review at all then that is fine too. On this website some of the novels are free and I enjoy them so I right a review. Although I have not made a living off of anything related to novels I think my review could help those who are deciding whether or not to read the novel or get more information about the book. I have also read more books here then I probably should so its not like I am completely new to books. If the author has an issue with my review I can also take down the review.
I_M_B_O_R_E_D
I_M_B_O_R_E_DLv3

nice review 👍

Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4

I think there is too much other person pov's Minsoo in particular is too long and wordy

oscarozo24
oscarozo24Lv13

I just wanted to come here and praise the Author. I've been looking for something good to read for years! I'm loving this story so much so far I don't even care if it starts having bad tropes later on. Ty for this story <3

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