oscarozo24

Asian but his name is..... Ron?

Is this author trolling us??

Dragon Ball Alternative is one of the worse DB fanfics. Basically, the MC just shadows the main plot making little to no story impact for the most part. After 100 ish chaps the story is still in freeza saga and MC still looking up to goku nut sack. Weird multiverse garbage starts around this time period and I'm really not a fan of that kind of convoluted plot. There really isn't a good DB fic out there imo.

Yo, this is hella boring... Author please put young adult tag or something. Nobody wana start reading something only to find out its a children's book. I can already predict he's going to be a horny teenie bopper living with mommy and daddy the whole story.

It's so annoying I can't describe my frustration at it. Looks like he was an orphan before now he regressed to annoy the readers into dealing with sh*t story arcs.

If it's an intelligent talking AI or gives missions I'm out. Tired of sh*t novels where mc gets possessed by yapping AI or forced tasks. Id rather be normal than have that BS.

I don't get it

What I initially thought of as a dubious start turned out to be a great one. Thanks for the chapter author san!

I never said I won't read, as I don't know if you're the original author or you are translating, but I like the writing/translation so far so I'll give it a fair shot. My advice is for constructive criticism, and I still believe it's a bad idea even if Baal is just one of many in the strongest demon pantheon. A slow gradual start against a minor demon lord is a cooler start and that is just my opinion so it's obviously subjective. Thank you kind sir for the reply, I respect you for writing or translating this.

I have to say, introducing the strongest demon in the entire realm as the antagonist in the very beginning is an extremely bad idea. You should have placed the MC in the domain of a minor demon lord instead. Really ruined the novel for me.