Item: Earth's Alpha Prime
Rating: 5
Author: Hemanth_

Hemanth_Lv124yr

2020-12-19 21:51

Overall great stroy with good quality, story developement, character design, and mainly the flashback story is wonderfull. Iam hoping a wonderfull revenge for his family and the development in the Trail world. AND PLEASE MAKE MORE AND MORE CHAPTER IN THIS NOVEL AND TRY TO MAKE CHAPTERS FASTER FOR READING

Earth's Alpha Prime

MN_1223

4.7

416 Chs

Liked by 26 people

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