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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_GgazeliLv104yr
2021-01-12 06:34

it's very good, I just don't understand the reason for not being a harem, I mean the MC will live for at least 3 thousand years, it is very unrealistic for him to have only one wife, especially if he is very powerful and has a high status, a MC who will live only 80 years like a normal person so it makes sense to have only 1 wife, you have to be very crazy to find out who a 3,000 year old monster will be faithful and have only one woman, not to mention that the MC before of rebirth could not have ***, a world of cultivation without a small harem of 3 or 4 wives is very strange

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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_GgazeliLv10

but also need a limit in the harem, 4 wife at most, more than 4 is exaggeration, harem must have love involved too and wives need to be strong and intelligent

MKWAME
MKWAMELv15

from what I understand is that the author likes to flesh his relationships out. it might still turn into a harem later on but I'd rather it take 50 plus chapters to flesh a girl out than some books where the MC all of a sudden has 10 girls... you really can't do alot of a personal character growth without time skipping and especially if the author does POV from the girls side imagine 10 girls or in this case as u state 3-4 the author would never progress with the story or lack character growth for progression

DefyingDemon
DefyingDemonLv12

How’s it unrealistic 😂 I’ve read plenty of novels with mc who are basically immortal or lives for thousands of years who only have 1 wife.

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pacul
paculLv13

it starts off very well, though the premise is obviously not new, the mc seems mature & driven, but after a few chapters the book unsurprisingly degraded, it's the usual op regressor mc with years of future knowledge doing his "best" to change the future, and I don't have any problem with that, the overall plot also written quite well, as for grammar I don't have competency to assess, but the little bits & pieces of story spices details that made me cringed hard & left me wondering if the author was a horny & hedonistic teenager, firstly the constant overly glorified mc, yes it's normal for people to admire good looking & well-off individuals, but for side characters & passerby to constantly mention how handsome & beautiful the main characters are in the exact same lines is not only really cringy, it also made the world & the inhabitants seems even less interesting than it already is, if you insist to constantly glorify mc, at least be more creative , rather than the usual copy pasted "he looks so handsome" passerby comments, use variations, like describing how people looks at him with shining eyes, or hushed voices and giggles from the girls, couples arguing, bystanders taking pictures, bad dad jokes of introducing their daughter to mc, or even hyperbole like drooling over him is ok once in a long while, there are literally plethora of these things. And then my biggest concern, the half-assed unrealistic perfectionism, good story conclusion is understandably desired, but poorly thought unrealistic good ending is worse than well thought & realistic bad one, The examples are conclusion of Mc's uncle story, its bad, but not that bad, and then Monica's, it's among the worst sh*t I've ever read, it's poorly thought, irresponsible, and unrealistic. Both made a pattern.

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