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Samhain666
Samhain666Lv154yr
2020-11-28 10:53

I can say that this is a very enjoyable novel to read, I suggest anyone who reads my review to give this novel a peruse, only thing that would make it better is harem 🤣 but even so it's one of my top reads right now

Rise of the White Dragon

Lruska
4.7
459 Chs

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_ReAdEr_
_ReAdEr_Lv3

Oh no again that shitty s*xist harem🙄🤮

4yr
12
Demonpig
DemonpigLv4

Agree with harem it world be better ❤️

3yr
6
Amer_HST
Amer_HSTLv1

How is it sexist? I understand if you don't like it but sexist? come on now lol

_ReAdEr_:Oh no again that shitty s*xist harem🙄🤮
3yr
_ReAdEr_
_ReAdEr_Lv3

by sexist that the author se*ualise women to do fan service. all of them are just not people to whom the MC is attracted by love, but just for his desire for them, and the author makes such situations where they fall in love with him for no justifiable reason.

Amer_HST:How is it sexist? I understand if you don't like it but sexist? come on now lol
3yr
2
Amer_HST
Amer_HSTLv1

The same thing happens with female MCs and their harems lol Nothing sexist about any of this, you just don't like harems which is more than fine but no need to turn nothing into something.

_ReAdEr_:by sexist that the author se*ualise women to do fan service. all of them are just not people to whom the MC is attracted by love, but just for his desire for them, and the author makes such situations where they fall in love with him for no justifiable reason.
3yr
1
_ReAdEr_
_ReAdEr_Lv3

yes, but neither I like inverse harem, they are still bs, all they do is se*ualise characters, wether male or female, thus se*ist, as this word isn't only referred to males but also to females, there is no exception.

Amer_HST:The same thing happens with female MCs and their harems lol Nothing sexist about any of this, you just don't like harems which is more than fine but no need to turn nothing into something.
3yr
ArogantYoungMaster
ArogantYoungMasterLv2

sexist? how? harem are made for both genders, for females there are reverse harem novels? how is it sexist?

_ReAdEr_:Oh no again that shitty s*xist harem🙄🤮
3yr
ArogantYoungMaster
ArogantYoungMasterLv2

another idiotic comment, that's the whole point of echhi genre.

_ReAdEr_:yes, but neither I like inverse harem, they are still bs, all they do is se*ualise characters, wether male or female, thus se*ist, as this word isn't only referred to males but also to females, there is no exception.
3yr
TheTrickster12
TheTrickster12Lv14

🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮Harem

3yr
1
The_4th
The_4thLv4

Please no more harem

3yr
1
DaoistusPnRe
DaoistusPnReLv2

No harem please

2yr
Other Reviews
mbrapshT
mbrapshTLv14

Until this point it is an okay story. Don't make it harem. The MC should get powerful over many years since he is thousand of years old and not in a couple of months. MC should become the most powerful human from Earth pretty quick before the towers and other worlds merge together. Also a random girl he teaches cultivation can not keep up in speed of cultivation with an old demon. And please don't add unnecessary drama or random encounters and cliche things. Another thing is to remember the age of MC when writing his character so he doesn't act like child. Good luck 😃

4yr

UsuarioInvalido
UsuarioInvalidoLv2

Cultivador BR fds Até agora está uma ótima novel, espero q continue assim :v ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

4yr
Dr987
Dr987Lv2

Hello author, nice one. Hope you dont give up. well....here we go again...waiting for new chapter...Legendary puppy eye more more more more

4yr
pacul
paculLv13

it starts off very well, though the premise is obviously not new, the mc seems mature & driven, but after a few chapters the book unsurprisingly degraded, it's the usual op regressor mc with years of future knowledge doing his "best" to change the future, and I don't have any problem with that, the overall plot also written quite well, as for grammar I don't have competency to assess, but the little bits & pieces of story spices details that made me cringed hard & left me wondering if the author was a horny & hedonistic teenager, firstly the constant overly glorified mc, yes it's normal for people to admire good looking & well-off individuals, but for side characters & passerby to constantly mention how handsome & beautiful the main characters are in the exact same lines is not only really cringy, it also made the world & the inhabitants seems even less interesting than it already is, if you insist to constantly glorify mc, at least be more creative , rather than the usual copy pasted "he looks so handsome" passerby comments, use variations, like describing how people looks at him with shining eyes, or hushed voices and giggles from the girls, couples arguing, bystanders taking pictures, bad dad jokes of introducing their daughter to mc, or even hyperbole like drooling over him is ok once in a long while, there are literally plethora of these things. And then my biggest concern, the half-assed unrealistic perfectionism, good story conclusion is understandably desired, but poorly thought unrealistic good ending is worse than well thought & realistic bad one, The examples are conclusion of Mc's uncle story, its bad, but not that bad, and then Monica's, it's among the worst sh*t I've ever read, it's poorly thought, irresponsible, and unrealistic. Both made a pattern.

4yr
MKWAME
MKWAMELv15

Great book so far! Cultivation wise it's nothing really new but intriguing. The MC is mature and yet playful when it comes to his family. He's not afraid to kill which is a plus in my books albeit it's only when someone crosses him or his family ( not for the slightest of things) I can't really speak on world building so far since the apocalypse hasn't happened yet but the relationships between MC and sides are heart warming. Overall it looks like the direction of this book is gonna go smoothly also it doesn't look like the author is going for a harem style relationship. But I hope that doesn't turn you off this book. I'd rate this worth reading and it doesn't feel like same old same old Cultivation novel. Trust me just look at how many books I've "read" on this app lol keep up the great work author looking forward to the end of the world! or in some cases the beginning :p

4yr
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_GgazeliLv10

it's very good, I just don't understand the reason for not being a harem, I mean the MC will live for at least 3 thousand years, it is very unrealistic for him to have only one wife, especially if he is very powerful and has a high status, a MC who will live only 80 years like a normal person so it makes sense to have only 1 wife, you have to be very crazy to find out who a 3,000 year old monster will be faithful and have only one woman, not to mention that the MC before of rebirth could not have ***, a world of cultivation without a small harem of 3 or 4 wives is very strange

4yr
NiceGuy
NiceGuyLv12

i just hope MC focuses on 1 girl in this one, but i am still not sure this will be good as you see GOING BACK IN TIME is getting boring now.. still let's go... i trust you author...

4yr
xSyphen
xSyphenLv11

hope author can add harem . . it will become more interesting for me tho lol[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

4yr
Readable
ReadableLv15

Author the best way to get power stones is to set a weekly goal for extra chapters. like 1,200 powerstone = +2 chapter on Sunday and 1,500 powerstones = +4extra chapters on Sunday. A good reference of someone doing this is The Lucifer's Descendent System and the first week he did 1,200 powerstones for +2 chapter, and 1,500 powerstones for +4 chapters and +1 chapter for every extra 500 powerstones. he increase this goal by 1,000 powerstones every week since then and people have always reached the goal just enough to get 5-6 extra chapters at the end of each week. This incentive brings people back just to give powerstones, because they know if they get enough they will get 6 extra chapters on Sunday in addition to the regular updates

4yr
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