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Aioria619
Aioria619Lv44yr
2020-11-17 11:22

I can not anymore, the truth is, I do not know how they give 5 stars, the mc is the typical Asian mc beta, I do not know why the authors describe the childhood of the mc when he is not even 1 year old, nobody cares about a baby that can speak at 8 months, the MC is also progressive so he is in favor of lesbians in a post apocalyptic world, MC is the typical Gary Stu who at 10 years old can easily defeat 13 children and is also very Handsome.

Steel Waste

Niggross
4.6
709 Chs

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Niggross
NiggrossAuthor

Idk if he'd qualify as a Gary Stu, but each to their own I guess.

4yr
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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Wow, that does sound bad... I mean what does homosexuality has even to do with the fallout? I remember playing new vegas and not even realising when some characters were gay, in fact, it was hidden in an interesting way. I hate it when people force down sexuality crap down our throats. Also, beta mc's are never a good sign nor silly childhood parts where the mc is one year old and perfection itself with his perfect look and everything else.

4yr
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conwall
conwallLv14

Have you played new Vegas Veronica is gay and it was like half the chapter. Plus the reason why it started when he was a kids was to show what was happening in the brotherhood.

4yr
58
lostboy859
lostboy859Lv2

This is why I never listen to bad reviews on a 4.5+ novel without reading it myself, the mc can't beat kids above him in combat only in f****** running, read the book before you listen to this review.

4yr
76
1theOverlord
1theOverlordLv2

the story is great man stop downgrading the author man. i love the story i do not want him to drop it

4yr
27
Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk
Gilgamesh_Of_UrukLv4

Mongrel, You Have This King's Thanks For Saving His Time, Here Is A Small Reward:

4yr
34
Pretend
PretendLv3

YEAH! STRAIGHT PEOPLE DONT HAVE ANYTHING TO WITH FalLOUT 76!!!! THEY SHOULD JUST DISAPPEAR FROM THE GAME! SUCH~ A GOOD IDEA

Uncle_Sheogorath:Wow, that does sound bad... I mean what does homosexuality has even to do with the fallout? I remember playing new vegas and not even realising when some characters were gay, in fact, it was hidden in an interesting way. I hate it when people force down sexuality crap down our throats. Also, beta mc's are never a good sign nor silly childhood parts where the mc is one year old and perfection itself with his perfect look and everything else.
4yr
10
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

What I meant is that any sexuality wasn't pushed into the players face. Meaning the player wouldn't know if some NPC is homosexual or not without actual specific speech or perk which allows you to find out from a special speech option that just comes up randomly. This makes the whole world more immersive.

Pretend:YEAH! STRAIGHT PEOPLE DONT HAVE ANYTHING TO WITH FalLOUT 76!!!! THEY SHOULD JUST DISAPPEAR FROM THE GAME! SUCH~ A GOOD IDEA
4yr
50
KumThrone
KumThroneLv2

Thanks for saving me from this dumpster fire, You require the best of rateings.

4yr
16
Red_baron
Red_baronLv3

A tu seul lue le livre mister simp...?

4yr
1
Red_baron
Red_baronLv3

A tu seul lue le livre mister simp...?

4yr
1
quaint
quaintLv6

Dude, I don’t think anyone in fallout cares if your gay. They’re all probably to busy trying not to die.

4yr
39
Hemorrhagician
HemorrhagicianLv1

Not gonna read it, so I'll just leave a comment on this based review. How tf you gonna "play all of them" and skip the best Fallouts smh. MC is clearly a pleb. This comment was made by Fallout 2 gang.

3yr
20
ncr_ranger
ncr_rangerLv13

Just try it, if you don't like it by 30 then drop it

Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk:Mongrel, You Have This King's Thanks For Saving His Time, Here Is A Small Reward:
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3yr
3
ncr_ranger
ncr_rangerLv13

Imagine having non 3d games, this post was made by has never owned any game before fallout 3 in the franchise gang

Hemorrhagician:Not gonna read it, so I'll just leave a comment on this based review. How tf you gonna "play all of them" and skip the best Fallouts smh. MC is clearly a pleb. This comment was made by Fallout 2 gang.
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3yr
5
Soul_of_a_Simp
Soul_of_a_SimpLv1

Actually, if you read it, it is easily one of the best fanfics on this site. I think it's funny how this fanfic has over a hundred reviews with a 4.5+ rating yet you drop it because of ONE bad review.

KumThrone:Thanks for saving me from this dumpster fire, You require the best of rateings.
3yr
10
Some_Random_O_O
Some_Random_O_OLv11

If I see multiple bad reviews I look for a good review that isn't "this novel is good!" copy and pasted over and over for word count.

lostboy859:This is why I never listen to bad reviews on a 4.5+ novel without reading it myself, the mc can't beat kids above him in combat only in f****** running, read the book before you listen to this review.
3yr
18
lostboy859
lostboy859Lv2

Well yeah I also agree on that one, but this novel (from what i have seen cause i could be wrong) doesnt have those reviews. so i decided to check for myself and thought it was pretty good. havent read this novel in a while though so my opinion may be a bit outdated

Some_Random_O_O:If I see multiple bad reviews I look for a good review that isn't "this novel is good!" copy and pasted over and over for word count.
3yr
1
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Yes, MC is beta... Nobody is interested in the life of a baby. The authors should know that it is annoying to read the life of a baby, so it would be best to write about the protagonist when he is 13 years old (beginning of the story).

3yr
7
Muhammad_Usama1
Muhammad_Usama1Lv3

homosexuality is a curse of humanity bro. a perverted and distorted practice. truly a trash of humanity. we just at least speak out against it. do you know how it is destroying the societ??

Uncle_Sheogorath:Wow, that does sound bad... I mean what does homosexuality has even to do with the fallout? I remember playing new vegas and not even realising when some characters were gay, in fact, it was hidden in an interesting way. I hate it when people force down sexuality crap down our throats. Also, beta mc's are never a good sign nor silly childhood parts where the mc is one year old and perfection itself with his perfect look and everything else.
3yr
11
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Maiykel
MaiykelLv4

I love your last novel by the way though many hated it. But who cares right. I know this is a bit early but I'm gonna give your new novel a full 5 star hehehehe

4yr

Literopat
LiteropatLv2

Quit after chapter 15. MC is a fucking juvenile beta. Moreover, this author's obsession with underage beta MCs can be traced in the fanfic about the witcher. What is the point in the presence of an MC if he cannot and does not want to change anything in the canonical sequences of events? He had two girlfriends, he could well influence their character so that they did not become lesbians, but were normal girls of the post-apocalypse world. But no, MC does not change anything, does nothing, he is busy with self-praise about how brilliant, handsome and strong he is in comparison with his peers. Although what to expect from a degenerate who, being in the womb, kicked her for entertainment, thereby causing pain and discomfort to the poor woman. Conclusion: a vile MC with low intelligence and a subdued psyche.

4yr
TheMostAbstract
TheMostAbstractLv11

I really like it, I have a soft spot for books that try to give true depth and such to them. This book even had me get close to tears at a few points. It's also nice to not see a Gary Stu and the very profound character development of the main character. Good job author, you've made a good book, keep it up and my stones are yours.

4yr
Bruno_Corre
Bruno_CorreLv2

In Portuguese . Eu não consigo engolir a mania dos autores de fazer um bebê ser incrível ,sinceramente é só dar uma pesquisada que você encontra o que um bebê pode ou não fazer antes dos 3~4 anos . Acho que a mínima idade que o corpo de um bebê aguentaria fazer exercícios mesmo que supérfluos seria 6 anos antes disso seria prejudicial. Agora eu sei que a história é ficcional sem um pingo de realidade mas isso realmente estava a experiência que poderia ter sido ótima para muitos . Aliás como o protagonista consegue pensar e raciocinar daquele jeito mesmo no útero ? Não seria impossível ? Acho que a idade mínima para ele ter pensamentos fluídos e raciocínios seria entre 3~4 ou seja é nessa idade que o cérebro humano como a trabalhar efetivamente . Claro essa é a opinião de alguém que não é médico nem formado em algum tipo de medicina ou seja eu posso estar errado ,se estiver por favor me corrijam.

4yr
Rank9
Rank9Lv5

going to give this story the old college try.Giving this story 5 stars just to make it more appealing to those that haven’t read your stories yet.I look forward to another lengthy and time consuming tale.My favorite kind.

4yr
Ninewive
NinewiveLv14

The author killed everyone and destroy everything. so the Whole freaking story doesn't matter, the whole kingdom building arc where he transformed Big mountain doesn't matter. everyone died!!! the end.

3yr
Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

Since there are reapeding 5 star from 1 person I balance it with 1 star. And yeah I read this novel, did not real liked the Mc thats why I dropped it and for those that ask me why can she the answer in the 3,... star Rewiew with many likes

3yr
gonilua
goniluaLv4

I just can't stomach the whole perfect 0-10 year old kid and how cool and handsome he is ... Oh well, all these things is just about preference.

4yr
C4HO0T5
C4HO0T5Lv4

this shit had me shaking. the way it flows by makes sense as it should. your writing has gotten so much better. good job on the fic and good luck to any future ones.

4yr
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