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Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv113yr
2021-09-24 06:28

Since there are reapeding 5 star from 1 person I balance it with 1 star. And yeah I read this novel, did not real liked the Mc thats why I dropped it and for those that ask me why can she the answer in the 3,... star Rewiew with many likes

Steel Waste

Niggross
4.6
709 Chs

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Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

Not 3,.. It was 2,5

3yr
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Aioria619
Aioria619Lv4

I can not anymore, the truth is, I do not know how they give 5 stars, the mc is the typical Asian mc beta, I do not know why the authors describe the childhood of the mc when he is not even 1 year old, nobody cares about a baby that can speak at 8 months, the MC is also progressive so he is in favor of lesbians in a post apocalyptic world, MC is the typical Gary Stu who at 10 years old can easily defeat 13 children and is also very Handsome.

4yr

Literopat
LiteropatLv2

Quit after chapter 15. MC is a fucking juvenile beta. Moreover, this author's obsession with underage beta MCs can be traced in the fanfic about the witcher. What is the point in the presence of an MC if he cannot and does not want to change anything in the canonical sequences of events? He had two girlfriends, he could well influence their character so that they did not become lesbians, but were normal girls of the post-apocalypse world. But no, MC does not change anything, does nothing, he is busy with self-praise about how brilliant, handsome and strong he is in comparison with his peers. Although what to expect from a degenerate who, being in the womb, kicked her for entertainment, thereby causing pain and discomfort to the poor woman. Conclusion: a vile MC with low intelligence and a subdued psyche.

3yr
Maiykel
MaiykelLv4

I love your last novel by the way though many hated it. But who cares right. I know this is a bit early but I'm gonna give your new novel a full 5 star hehehehe

4yr
TheMostAbstract
TheMostAbstractLv11

I really like it, I have a soft spot for books that try to give true depth and such to them. This book even had me get close to tears at a few points. It's also nice to not see a Gary Stu and the very profound character development of the main character. Good job author, you've made a good book, keep it up and my stones are yours.

4yr
Bruno_Corre
Bruno_CorreLv2

In Portuguese . Eu não consigo engolir a mania dos autores de fazer um bebê ser incrível ,sinceramente é só dar uma pesquisada que você encontra o que um bebê pode ou não fazer antes dos 3~4 anos . Acho que a mínima idade que o corpo de um bebê aguentaria fazer exercícios mesmo que supérfluos seria 6 anos antes disso seria prejudicial. Agora eu sei que a história é ficcional sem um pingo de realidade mas isso realmente estava a experiência que poderia ter sido ótima para muitos . Aliás como o protagonista consegue pensar e raciocinar daquele jeito mesmo no útero ? Não seria impossível ? Acho que a idade mínima para ele ter pensamentos fluídos e raciocínios seria entre 3~4 ou seja é nessa idade que o cérebro humano como a trabalhar efetivamente . Claro essa é a opinião de alguém que não é médico nem formado em algum tipo de medicina ou seja eu posso estar errado ,se estiver por favor me corrijam.

4yr
Rank9
Rank9Lv5

going to give this story the old college try.Giving this story 5 stars just to make it more appealing to those that haven’t read your stories yet.I look forward to another lengthy and time consuming tale.My favorite kind.

4yr
Ninewive
NinewiveLv14

The author killed everyone and destroy everything. so the Whole freaking story doesn't matter, the whole kingdom building arc where he transformed Big mountain doesn't matter. everyone died!!! the end.

2yr
gonilua
goniluaLv4

I just can't stomach the whole perfect 0-10 year old kid and how cool and handsome he is ... Oh well, all these things is just about preference.

4yr
C4HO0T5
C4HO0T5Lv4

this shit had me shaking. the way it flows by makes sense as it should. your writing has gotten so much better. good job on the fic and good luck to any future ones.

3yr
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