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hello friends this is my humble novel, I am a novice writer, who wanted to try my luck and see if I can sustain myself from my writing, I hope you like it and support me, vote as much as you can and thank you for reading my novel. English is not my first language so I translated it with google.

Frankly it's just hard to read. Even if your an ******* some of the mistakes shouldn't have been made especially if you've read other stories. In example your overzealous need for the readers to know your mc is the most handsome man to grace the earth. You also need to learn how to write in general. Hope you'll strive to better your work but at the moment I don't think your up for it. Good luck.

Now let me be honest. THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY. I have read other stories like this with smart and manipulative MC who is not dark and I easily find it among the top 3 of such novel's in webnovel as far as characters and story is concerned. This is unique as the MC is transmigrated in pre book era and is an *****. Moreover the creativity is good though I find some ideas like goblin copied. Also it is the dark lord Dumbledore version so yeah idiots who like dumbles it's not for u. Updates for now are quite good and much better than many others of same genre(though it may be cause it's new) Now the only problem I find, other than few plotholes (which are genuinely quite Less compared to other FFs ) , is THE LANGUAGE , don't take me wrong as it is perfectly readable but Still it depreciates the quality of Novel as some minor confusion while reading can leave u with a bad taste BUT ULTIMATELY IT IS STILL TOP 5 In the Smart Male Self Insert in Harry Potter type novels (and I don't read novel's with female MCs So I don't know about that ) I still suggest the author to work on language as it would improve the quality of Novel a lot .

I'm not gonna lie, this has very interesting ideas but to me, it was poorly executed. The mc is just way too strong it is a joke. He is basically a god... I loved his backstory (other than the part where the fam should have been killed by Grindelwald and not Voldemort) For me, his three wishes should have been the family background, his looks and maybe something like potent magic power? Then it should have shown the mc growing up, learning all the secrets of his house and the things with the dragons maybe even getting his own. So he won't be a god but is still pretty op from the things he learns in his travels and from his family. We can watch him learn these feeling closer to the character. Then he comes back to do everything mainly build his city and focus on that. Forget all these other things such as controlling muggle world all the magical market's etc He can link his islands as resorts etc that you teleport to from the city, create the private school, the stadium etc. This can then grow and build on into canon and see how it affects the world. Maybe even have it mixed into marvel or something. Having your own magical city in marvel etc. I feel these would have been much more interesting to read tbh. Cause instead I feel what I am reading is a god mc where everything just jumps about, skipping massive parts, making random sht up and adding it in with no thought... It goes way to fast to the point you get confused about what has happened and how. Like he is suddenly friends with the goblin nation, he has all these girls that he gains in seconds etc etc The book is also wayy to focused on how amazingly handsome the mc is and how every girl or person that sees him is start struck and want to worship him... it's honestly like half the story is about this. I hope the author reads this and slows down, think about the plot more etc gl to him

Hard to read. Surprisingly, the general grammar is better than pure mtl, but sadly that doesn't change the fact that the story is no better in its own categories than the grammar.

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i'll be honest. it's clearly a first work, the first chapter skips the begining of the story so there's no development and goes straight to the problem. i'm not gonna get annoying listing all bad things to me here, but when your story starts with a women thinking how handsome and awesome the mc is and how big his dick is... well i knew this is not for me

Hello there Memonic. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.