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readtokilltime
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2021-03-12 18:52

The story has a good premise, but it also has a lot of problems. Such as grammar for one, it's just hard to read a sentence and understand what it means, there's also sentences that seemed to be put together with Korean. Mc gets strong but tries to hide it for no apparent reason. Usually when we have a mc hiding powers it's bc he has enemies or he wants to get to a certain power level where when he does let people know he's strong no one can hurt his family. In this one hes strong enough to be an A class but hides it. Wants to make money but doesn't have the smarts to think "maybe I should join and be a hunter and just start out as D rank" if he wants to hide his powers so much. The main thing in my kind of low rating is the grammar though, that's what puts this novel below average for me, not the hiding power and, not the kind of dumb mc. I mean I'm so focused on what a sentence should mean that I miss half of what I'm reading if you can get what I'm trying to say.

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Phantomfiend
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The latter chapter is about join guild, and there many of small reason for MC to hide his strength.

Divine_Onahole
Divine_OnaholeLv3

if you can make a plot/reason to hiding his ability why not vice viersa? you do know hiding ability route was always bwnn anoying

Phantomfiend:The latter chapter is about join guild, and there many of small reason for MC to hide his strength.
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