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Smart_Dog
Smart_DogLv24yr
2020-11-01 01:02

This is a solo leveling type of genre. It has a good plot. There an unnoticeable grammatical error but there’s nothing to worry about. The author has a good job of putting a definition for layman term. Looking forward for more chaps

I Am The Anti-Mage

Phantomfiend
4.2
272 Chs

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Phantomfiend
PhantomfiendAuthor

Thank you! I know is similar like SL type of genre, but I will make the story different and not too much cliche. And for grammatical error, if you have free time. You can help me with paragraph comment to point out the mistake. It will make me better on writing it. Again, Thank you so much!

4yr
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Wolvking
WolvkingLv13

No this is returnee type writing

Phantomfiend:Thank you! I know is similar like SL type of genre, but I will make the story different and not too much cliche. And for grammatical error, if you have free time. You can help me with paragraph comment to point out the mistake. It will make me better on writing it. Again, Thank you so much!
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4yr
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UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11

idk about sl the authors kinda a jerk toward Japanese people low key causing nationalism and ww3 instead china number 1 but Korea number 1

3yr
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Shamir_Rimal
Shamir_RimalLv11

Romance?

3yr
Cade_Hill
Cade_HillLv14

Thats how koreans are, in a lot of their literature they talk about how they hate the japanese for occupying their country so many Years ago during war and trying to take over or some sh**.

UncleDodger:idk about sl the authors kinda a jerk toward Japanese people low key causing nationalism and ww3 instead china number 1 but Korea number 1
2yr
2
UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11

sorry I was listing all cliches I find about Korea and Japan already apologized cough war crimes denial cough.

Cade_Hill:Thats how koreans are, in a lot of their literature they talk about how they hate the japanese for occupying their country so many Years ago during war and trying to take over or some sh**.
2yr
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Phantomfiend
PhantomfiendAuthor

Hello, Shameless Author here. This is My 2nd Story and I learn a lot from the predecessor. I really like dungeon a lot, since I like play game, either Adventure or RPG one. So this not difficult or easy than the first one. [img=coins] Before write the story, I create the complete rough outline for I Am The Anti-Mage. Like what happen on early stage, how the MC at middle of the stage or how MC fight for the Later stage. What MC enemy, What MC fighting for, What power did MC have. What MC turning point, or MC key point, MC stepping stone and etc. But even though I have the complete rough outline, it didn't mean I have the complete story, I just lay a foundation for this story can be finished. The only thing that stopping me from update the chapter is whether I'm to lazy or I'm not in the front of my PC. [img=recommend]

4yr

Phantomfiend
PhantomfiendAuthor

I want to give a lengthy review to explain that I have grown since I first wrote IAM. However, I changed my mind because I didn't think it would prove anything. I know the first 50 chapters were poor. And also a lot of coercive plots going on all over the place. And I hope that many of you will point out my mistakes so that I can learn to be better. Rather than just saying this and that is not good. There is no detail at all, and that leaves me with no direction in which to improve. I also learned to write with tenses because a reader told me to distinguish between the past and present tenses when writing a sentence. Sometimes, some readers help me remember the stories in the early chapters so that they are in line with the plot. That's proof if you don't just say nonsense. You can help an amateur writer who only has a story in his head to become a good writer.

3yr
YakunanHD
YakunanHDLv5

this story is a solo leveling type story but very downgraded. grammar is rough. the main character doesn't really seem as an mc because of the lack of actual content surrounding him. The story speaks of random hunters and soldier 97% of the time and the other 3% is the mc talking about his guilt for his fathers death. the story is very slow paced but not interesting enough to be like that.

3yr
Brezer
BrezerLv14

it reads like your typical Korean returnee story except with terrible spelling. not really sure if this is a half ass translation or what. it is barely above a MTL . read 8f you're bored ....

4yr
Phantomfiend
PhantomfiendAuthor

I can't help, to just write another shameless review to put an information. I am very open for a suggestion, you critic me too. But don't judge a novel that yet has complete, because your critic might be answered by a chapter in the future. You can share you opinion and though about this novel, but don't judge everything from just a mere few chapter. IF there something you didn't like or something you didn't understand or know the meaning. Please use paragraph comment on the sentence, I might tell you something as long as is not a spoiler. Who knows, something that not likeable might changed in the future chapter. something you didn't understand and don't know, might be explained and revealed in the future chapter too. The only one that know how this novel/story will progress is me, the one and only author of this. I can't just make a novel/story and dump all the information and explanation in one breath. It need to take step by step. If everything already shared and explained at the very first chapter, what the use of 2nd chapter, 3rd chapter and etc.

4yr
Gilbert_Andal
Gilbert_AndalLv14

Slow development Tried 20 chapters But the Slow explanation and lack of action is what lost me The family aspect is well written but that was the best part of the novel

3yr
JustMortal
JustMortalLv11

To be honest, I got hooked up in first few chapters. It's tempting, but after he got back to his family it's like his brain has lost some function. 😂 He don't know much about the world cuz he's in another world for 30yrs. He keep asking questions to people about something related to power, he got phone but didn't use it. He can just search it up but nah! I want to be looked like stupid. And it's weird to read some other languages (except name) in english sentence, why not just translate it to english 😂 . like what a happen to France(in this novel) the guy shouting a french world. Me: Open up google and translate it. Wtf bro can u just write it in full english. It's good btw, it has "I level up alone" vibe but the grammar mistake and the stupidity of the mc ruined it. Btw I'm still reading it cuz im bored. I don't know if my english is good or bad, english is my 3rd language so yeah and I'm still a student still learning. Hoping for improvement ☺️

3yr
losnxd
losnxdLv13

Nothing new here, and what is there is lower quality the rest in average and riddled with gramatical errors Needs editing before im going back. Sorry but first 10 chap didnt catch me.

3yr
readtokilltime
readtokilltimeLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
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