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Phantomfiend
PhantomfiendAuthor4yr
2020-10-31 06:04

I can't help, to just write another shameless review to put an information. I am very open for a suggestion, you critic me too. But don't judge a novel that yet has complete, because your critic might be answered by a chapter in the future. You can share you opinion and though about this novel, but don't judge everything from just a mere few chapter. IF there something you didn't like or something you didn't understand or know the meaning. Please use paragraph comment on the sentence, I might tell you something as long as is not a spoiler. Who knows, something that not likeable might changed in the future chapter. something you didn't understand and don't know, might be explained and revealed in the future chapter too. The only one that know how this novel/story will progress is me, the one and only author of this. I can't just make a novel/story and dump all the information and explanation in one breath. It need to take step by step. If everything already shared and explained at the very first chapter, what the use of 2nd chapter, 3rd chapter and etc.

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tezz
tezzLv4

is this yaoi?

Phantomfiend
PhantomfiendAuthor

is not 100% not.

tezz:is this yaoi?
tezz
tezzLv4

hahaha good novel bro, you should put a tag 'Not Yaoi'. the first chapter had too much bromance for my taste

Phantomfiend
PhantomfiendAuthor

Thank you! :) Uhh... i want to show their 30 years of friendship. but always got mistaken for that. T--T

tezz:hahaha good novel bro, you should put a tag 'Not Yaoi'. the first chapter had too much bromance for my taste
Loliput
LoliputLv2

HELLLLLOO:/ is there any harem/romance or any girl involved whit the mc and please tell me he does not find reasons to kill someone! Just KILL👿

Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5

Hey auther can you tell both me and the other guy if there is romance or harem

Phantomfiend:Thank you! :) Uhh... i want to show their 30 years of friendship. but always got mistaken for that. T--T
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Phantomfiend
PhantomfiendAuthor

For harem. I think there will be none for this story. but for romance, there might be happen at the later stage.

Matt_pike:Hey auther can you tell both me and the other guy if there is romance or harem
Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5

K thx

Phantomfiend:For harem. I think there will be none for this story. but for romance, there might be happen at the later stage.
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Chesquilk
ChesquilkLv4

Why does it sound like Only I Level Up the synopsis makes it sound like it takes place in the same time

Lu_Ck
Lu_CkLv13

Author why is this kinda similar to limit breaker novel??

Lu_Ck
Lu_CkLv13

I mean manwha or comics

Jefrey_Blackmore
Jefrey_BlackmoreLv5

hi

I_like_Leek
I_like_LeekLv10

Hello

Jefrey_Blackmore:hi
Universal_Monarch
Universal_MonarchLv1

or u read it too, the power level there is broken

Lu_Ck:Author why is this kinda similar to limit breaker novel??
VenerableDio
VenerableDioLv13

Why do most authors call themselves shameless?

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