Review Detail of N3wman in The System: Civilian Shinobi
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honestly, this is just your run of the mill naruto fanfic. the system is absolutely broken and allows the MC to transcend all sensible boundaries. if you enjoy that type of thing, that this is your story. however, if you're looking for a good read where stuff makes sense, then I'd recommend looking elsewhere.
The System: Civilian Shinobi
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it is a good honest review. however I'm going to have to say this is a decent fun story. there are many things I can gripe about. other reviews cover my gripes pretty good. the immaturity of the mc. that the biggest part of the story that knocks me out of the story. I hated the system, however the author listened to his critics and changed it. including the use of it pretty well. now its something in the background he can use for plot armor but does not destroy the story.
Mike_Smith:it is a good honest review. however I'm going to have to say this is a decent fun story. there are many things I can gripe about. other reviews cover my gripes pretty good. the immaturity of the mc. that the biggest part of the story that knocks me out of the story. I hated the system, however the author listened to his critics and changed it. including the use of it pretty well. now its something in the background he can use for plot armor but does not destroy the story.