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MC who is so good at the beginning is now a dog on a leash despite him already achieving Admiral rank and now to ensure that the three admiral is the as canon Author remove MC's admiral position in the one of the most idiotic way and what annoy is that author didn't even hint if MC will make a comeback on his own or is MC waiting for the leash that the five elder has on him loosen so he can be an admiral again MC for now has lost power on the marine and his only consolation is that he can hear five elder's meeting which is con than pro if he retain his rank and maybe only regain power when canon start which means Author probably can't think of any creative ideas anymore
yeah time show Dog Mc "important" position
MC should threaten to leave the marine to became a bounty hunter or worst a pirate . This chapter disappointed me as MC didn't even show his anger by him being ordered to be a dog MC while not invincible is still among the strongest but him accepting this level of humiliation is worst part this novel had done
Thanks for the chapter update Hope MC doesn't embarrass himself in front of his team like he did in front of the bunch of kids and became their ace immediately because first impression last and the team might think he's unreliable like how Sakuragi was treated by his team
June is a coward for his passive way of facing problem and isn't the reason he died in the first place is because he knows too much about White Tiger gang but he act like doesn't know or even familiar to the ways of White Tiger boss or even use the secret he knows to his advantage Hate too much Passive MC
June is a coward at this point and can't even solve his problem on his own , he knows that Lin Zhi is a bad guy but still let him be until the last moment and usually can't do anything about the problem , based on this story format June will receive help again because as I previously stated before that he can't do anything on his ownThis story is getting worse and worse every chapter
Good chapter but bad fight scene , and the realization of his refusal to change the plot can be done in another way and this chapter show me that while Bakugou is epitome of Perfect Victory then Jonas is an Indecisive fanboy , mixing them can be bad especially when Jonas personality became the prominent one
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