N3wman
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N3wman6mthReplied to ArgoTheSkywingI've never experienced it, but losing someone especially close to you in a tragic "accident" where you are completely helpless is absolutely devastating.
The despair of never being able to see her again came back to me in full force as I laid my head back down on the ice and wept. For the ones closest to us, can we ever truly be done mourning their loss?- N3wman6mthReplied to JustS0me0neFrench
they'll come into play later 🤫
She grumbled and spoke under her breath as she shook her head. She then deactivated her lightsaber and put it back on her belt. "Chevaliers Hérités will be paying you a visit soon. Au revior, American. Until next time." - N3wman6mthReplied to Karl_Queflander
this is written in first person. if the MC doesn't understand the language, there is no need for the reader to understand it either. it's a creative choice I made since the whole story is from the perspective of the MC. tbh, this entire thing is an exercise in writing first person because I want to write an entire story where the MC is an old man telling his story to his grandkids.
Through the broken window, a voice sounded. "Tāmen zài zhè suǒ fángzi lǐ." - N3wman6mthReplied to Sargon37
the Padawan aren't supposed to know that tho lol
There was no time limit? What about the ice? How would I get out if the ice reformed? Ah, whatever. I can cross that bridge when I come to it. - N3wman6mthReplied to wahlfire
it's fixed now
The cool ground felt good as I caught my breath. Despite the brevity of the shootout, manipulating all those bullets was mentally exhausting. In the end, more training was needed. - N3wman6mthReplied to
there is, in fact, a missing chapter... idek how that happened. I stg I published it
The cool ground felt good as I caught my breath. Despite the brevity of the shootout, manipulating all those bullets was mentally exhausting. In the end, more training was needed. - N3wman6mthReplied to Cory_U
who asked
I shook my head. "There is no need. I will be human." - N3wman6mthReplied to Joshua_Gagnon
you might be able to put all the pieces together reading it, but Kyle is living it. when we look back at history, we think "how could they have been so dumb?" people will be looking back at us whilst asking the same question. consider it from that viewpoint.
Ch 139 Man of Integrity - N3wman7mthReplied to DemiLich
shrug
He dug into his pocket and tossed an untouched fruit to me. "I found an animal eating one that had fallen from a tree. It didn't keel over and die so I climbed up and grabbed some for myself." - N3wman7mthReplied to DemiLichI heard a chuckle from the other side. "Good morning indeed. Soryn, there is a task for which I require your assistance."
- N3wman7mthReplied to DemiLich
i mean, the star of Coruscant being a wreck on Hoth is a plot point in KOTOR
"Today, we embark on a voyage that will put an end to not only this war, but to the Empire as well. If successful, the Imperial capital of Dromund Kaas will be no more. All you need to do is follow my orders and refrain from asking questions. Individual briefings on your roles shall be sent over to your respective CSGs. Return and prepare yourselves. We will be entering hyperspace in one hour. Dismissed." - N3wman8mthReplied to JustS0me0neFrench
I designed the MC after myself. I've been told my whole life that I am wise beyond my age.
I sighed. "Most difficult is the journey with its destination yet unknown. Knowing where you're headed allows you to plan and find the way but how can you even start without knowing where you're going? Yes, you can just start walking but what guarantee is there that you'll ever reach your destination? If you do know where you're headed, then there's only one direction that you need to head in." - N3wman8mthReplied to CobraQuantum
they only have 11 thus far 😭
Kuat Drive Yards had just recently delivered the first lot of cruisers for us. Our design was very similar to the Harrower-Class Dreadnoughts of the Sith Empire. They did have some impressive battleships in both aesthetic and function after all. - N3wman8mthReplied to SavvyDragon
Violet (IRL name Vanessa) was the girl he met during the officer training course. they then served on Alderaan and Kuat together and she is now the Director of Operations for ANV. There's a little more but I don't know how far you are along in the story so I won't spoil.
Ch 118 The Great Escape - N3wman8mthReplied to I_Sleep_Allday
death warrants can be signed with a lightsaber
I shook my head. "Nope. This one's on Violet. I'm only hear to sign things. Whether that be with my pen or with my lightsaber, that is yet to be determined." - N3wman8mthReplied to JustS0me0neFrenchCh 110 A Different Side
- N3wman8mthReplied to Granville4554
nope. just MC... for nowbut srsly, won't be whole familysentient force sensitive beings can feel the emotions of others
I shook my head, becoming frustrated with how clueless I was. "Wait wait wait, can someone tell me what the fuck is happening?" - N3wman8mthReplied to Jack_Fall3n