a well thought out and we'll executed fanfic. the story is about 30 - 45% canon and the rest is original. a good MC that, although helps others, is still not naiv and can deal with threats. excellent grammar as well as spelling. side characters are OC and has personal development as well as play a good role of the book, but not so much it outshines the MC. Ps. nice romance as well, not rushed but not prolonged, and got built up well.
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who is the love interest?
an OC, but a good one
DragonkingKyo:who is the love interest?
5head PogU
I’m out
5head:an OC, but a good one
Yeah same
ExaltedCrow:I’m outimage
No harem in an Medieval magical world. And romance with and OC and not with established characters like hermoine, etc. I'm out.
5head:an OC, but a good one
Same
basedgod:5head PogU
Medieval??? The setting of the story is from 91-98... Wut do u mean medieval... the original story itself had no cases polygamy within the wizard community+ the fact that they still had to adhere to the general rules of muggle government(with values not much diff at all from now, if not even more traditional(in a religious sense)).
CxD18:No harem in an Medieval magical world. And romance with and OC and not with established characters like hermoine, etc. I'm out.
So far I have read every single chapter that's out (157) and there have been no described rape, or rape to anyone close or even relevant to the story for that matter. I don't know where you got this from, maybe you are thinking of the wrong book?
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eh maybe is another similar novel, my bad, when you read 14+ hours a day and stay awake more than one some shit start to happen
5head:So far I have read every single chapter that's out (157) and there have been no described rape, or rape to anyone close or even relevant to the story for that matter. I don't know where you got this from, maybe you are thinking of the wrong book?
no problem, just didn't want to scare away potential readers 👍
ghustV:eh maybe is another similar novel, my bad, when you read 14+ hours a day and stay awake more than one some shit start to happen
Agreed
Using oc in a world where u have many choices is stupid and not interesting
5head:an OC, but a good one
As long as the OC is properly developed, its fine. Besides, Harry Potter world don't have many good characters. Maybe luna but the others are just meh. This is definitely the best HP fic on this site or at least in the top 3. You'll be missing out on something incredible if u don't read it. And its not a villain MC.
AKARYUU:Using oc in a world where u have many choices is stupid and not interesting
a fanfic with only one target wich is also OC? what the point of the fanfic then? the good things about fanfics is that you already know character
5head:an OC, but a good one
The story doesn't have to circle around a romance to be good. This story has good og romance, good og plot as well as a good interference with the original plot. The og characters are still there and are interactive as well as having character development based on the MC's actions. MC has a lot of interactions with the original characters as well.
WebReaderPub:a fanfic with only one target wich is also OC? what the point of the fanfic then? the good things about fanfics is that you already know character
It's not only the characters, it's the world. And there are many characters from the books, only MC's friends and gf are OC. There really isn't a problem, and all the OCs in this book are more fleshed out than most of the HP chars. Like Rowling didn't even know what to do with Ron and made him join the joke shop.
WebReaderPub:a fanfic with only one target wich is also OC? what the point of the fanfic then? the good things about fanfics is that you already know character
Awesome Fanfic 👌a real gem. Good job author .
Romance with hermoine is so cliché and gross
CxD18:No harem in an Medieval magical world. And romance with and OC and not with established characters like hermoine, etc. I'm out.
yeahhhhh, I'm a harem guy and I like fanfics for the characters I know so not having a harem and it being and OC.... I think imma pass on this one
WebReaderPub:a fanfic with only one target wich is also OC? what the point of the fanfic then? the good things about fanfics is that you already know character
